Advances in transportation and communication like the airplane and the telephone have changed the way that nations interact with each other in a global society. Choose another technological innovation that you think is important.
Give specific reasons and examples for your choice.
Modern ways of transportation and communications like airplane and television plays a crucial role in a global society. Similar technological inventions computers and internet are miraculous which play significant role and radically alter the way that nations interact with each other. In the following essay, I intend to put forth my points to support this view.
To begin with, internet is an amazing technological advancements which makes numerous things easier for people. It diminishes the distance among loved ones which was not possible in the past. People can communicate through internet with each other from around the globe. Also, long distance relationships are not a problem anymore because internet provides free calls and video chatting. To exemplify, I had never met my relatives in India because of some travel restriction and communication problems between the countries. However, because of the internet I recently saw my cousins in India via Skype. I was so happy and delighted to meet them through video chat and now we can talk more often. This would not have been possible without the internet. Therefore, internet and computer changes the way in which modern society interact by bringing near their loved ones.
In addition, internet provides trouble-free ways of learning and seeking knowledge. Students can get education from any country they like. Previously, the students had to travel to distinct places so they seek better education. Internet solves this problem as remote learning through computer and internet. For instance, in our university the students had to move from department to department to study their minor course. To be more specific, if a student is Physiology major and selected microbiology minor they had to run for the class in the microbiology department. However, because of the internet university now offers courses online for students , even it allows them to study at home. Moreover, it is facile to seek certification from any international university online which ameliorates our chances of getting better career opportunities.
In conclusion, internet and computer are an amazing technological innovation which are significant in a global society. This is because, it reduces the long distance relationships among loved ones and because seeking better knowledge from around the world is possible through internet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2017.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48097826087 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98144613993 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532608695652 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3437438865 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6818181818 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139199552009 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446966945427 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652847723153 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10487116477 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083556853784 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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