Advances in transportation and communication like the airplane and the telephone have changed the way that nations interact with each other in a global society. Choose another technological innovation that you think is important.
Give specific reasons and examples for your choice.
In recent years, with the advancement of technology our life is completely transform and there are numerous technologies that become essential in our time like airplanes, phones and internet. In all of these, the best invention is internet and computers because with its help you can connect to people all over the globe and you do not need travelling to meet them and to see their faces. On computer you have internet that means everything can be done by sitting home. I think internet is the most modern and amazing technology. I think this way for the following reasons which i will explore in this essay.
First, internet is the mother of all invention, it helps you to submit your utility bills in 2 to 3 minutes. Now a days banking is switched to online and you can transfer millions to another person in seconds. For instance, I do remember when my mother worked in a bank she was always tired because it required a lot of hard work by counting millions of paper bill and there were many chances of human error which was so stressful and transfer took almost 5 to 7 working days. However, when my father goes to office to submit bills and it took hours and now i do it in one touch.
Second, in finding research paper internet helps college and universities students , they do not need to go at alternative libraries and buy any book and journal of research all of them are available online. As we see in 2019 covid virus spread in the world and for safety schools and colleges were closed for 6 to 10 months but it did not effect the studies of children because we had internet. Teachers started the online class for students by which one year of every student was save.
In conclusion, internet overcomes the need of transportation and telephone by increasing the demand of computers having internet. I believe internet should be available in all education setup and in government offices. If, there is one thing for the ease of human being why we do not utilize it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58757062147 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57264384051 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567796610169 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3207721731 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.266666667 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.098315655318 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0368456455968 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395625839316 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0588467014115 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594422352798 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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