Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Visiting museums is the best way to learn about a country
The musuem is a place that enccompasses a plethora of cutural heritage of a country. In my opinion, visiting museums is the best way to seek information about a country. In the following essay I intend to put forth my arguments to support my view.
To begin with, in a modern museum there are plenty of relics and artifacts that are displayed along with the information on it. Also, the museums have small booklets that describe about the things in a comprehensive way. For example, in high school I got a chance to visit the Pakistan Air force museum, I was so delighted to see various dummies of fighter planes that our military uses for the defence of our country. Also, they displayed some weapons in a chronological order that showed us how they improved in it. There was also a small theatre that shows a movie about our plane fighters. It was a lot of knowledge, that I was never aware before about our military. I felt so proud to learn about the air defence of my country just by visiting the museum. If I had never been to this museum, I would never know about my country Air force.
In addition, some museums have fun and interactive activites that develop people interest and increases their horizon of learning. Some musuems do not charge any admission fee which makes it more accessible to public. The Ripley Museum of believe it or it is great example of this. This museum is unique in style. It taught me a lot new knowldege in an innovative way as, the museum shows different inevntions of American scientists, that amazed me. Also, it shows exhibits of all unique animals and insects that are native of United States. Moreover, the space world in the museum have some fun activities for young children and adults, that give them a sense of being really in space. Thus, this example elucidates that museums is the best place to learn about a country
In conclusion, I strongly believe that a person learns about a country plenty by visiting its museum. This is because, museum contains important information about modern days and historical events, and because museums are fun and interactive way of learning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, really, so, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71122994652 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58827948873 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513368983957 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2944003468 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31426777118 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934617603423 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091961973648 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199207376697 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399483187961 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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