When you face a difficult problem in life what do you feel is the best way to solve it asking someone with more experience for advice about the problem finding information about the problem using the Internet taking a long time to think about the problem
Problems are a part of life and it is true in everyone's life have different problems. The human life is full of challenges and we have to face them with our strength. As we are living in the modern world where technology has over come all things, but it can not provide the solutions of our problems. It is important for people to share the problems with loved ones or friends. In the following essay, I intend to put forth my points and reasons of support.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that, whenever there is a huge problem it also have a solution. It is arduous to resolve problem alone sometimes so it is good if it is shared with the person who have a life experience like our parents or elderly people. For instance, when I was in university I was stuck in a serious issue and for me sucide is the only option. Moreover, I told my friend and asked for her suggestion and on her advice I complained to our dean about the guy who accustomed to bully me. As a result, dean warned him and I feel so delightful that I have such experienced friend in my circle. Thus, this instance elucidates that discuss is the best solution to the problems.
Secondly, there are people who do not want to share and suffer from a serious consequences. There are thousands of problem that are related to life and you can not find and information regarding it on internet that is why it is always better to tell things that bother. For example, my cousin we both are of same age and I graduated three years back and he is still in university. Last year he told us that he had completed his degree and his parents were so happy and two months back we got to know he failed numerous papers and did not graduate and the sadest part he never discussed his problem with anyone and now faced the consequences. Therefore, this example illustrates that do not rely on anyone for information just ask for advice.
To wrap to, I believe that technology can never compete with the human beings. No doubt, there are many benefits of internet but it can never works like a real person who is full of experiences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, no doubt, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39743589744 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5265727814 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520512820513 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.83526087 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2777777778 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72222222222 5.45110844103 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251708043787 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070187260742 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613319307855 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128058989216 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595460326013 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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