Some people believe that students should be given one long vacation each year. Others believe that students should have several short vacations throughout the year. Which view do you agree with?
People state that merely one long vacation in a year is enough to recovery their energy and be prepared for the next study year. However, others think otherwise. They believe that students should have many short vacations during the year. In my opinion, it is better for students to have sheer one long vacation in a year. I feel this way as I will talk over in this article.
First of all, it is crucial that students have only a vacation throughout the year because this way they can refresh memories and return to the next educational level better recovered. For example, researches have shown that students with one vacation could recover the stress better than those who had many short time to get over from stress. Besides, those with longer recovering time had better performances in the next study level. Therefore, this example illustrates the desideratum of one longer vacation in a year.
Moreover, having many short vacation hinders the students because after the recovering time they get lazy and do not want to get back to school again. For instance, according to Albert Einstein, students who go for short periods of vacancy become lazy and would rather stay home than go back to school because, as it is only a few days, students have not had enough time to overcome stress and feel the necessity of more time to do it. Thus, this instance clarifies the necessity of a longer time for recovering.
Furthermore, having more time for vacation enables the brain to get strong enough against ailments. As one example of it, Dr. Albert from University of New York City has shown that brains from students with longer vacations were stronger than those with short ones. Hence, this last example shows that taking one long vacation overdoes the short ones.
Finally, I strongly support the idea that having only one long vacation during the year is better because it helps the student's brain, helps to overcome adversities and it does not undermine students at all.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error – use past participle here: 'sheered'.
Suggestion: sheered
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8550295858 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38299422186 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461538461538 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.0 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3731200411 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5625 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1875 5.45110844103 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374725548462 0.236089414692 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144718116454 0.076458572812 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113235441213 0.0737576698707 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233876813403 0.150856017488 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104360631027 0.0645574589148 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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