Some people argue Laws changes human behavior whereas some disagree. Do you agree with it? Argumentative / persuasive/ opinionated type essay
The law is a tool that government uses to have control over the population. They are endorsed to fend off chaos, hence authorities have the absolute power over the population. Although some people believe that laws do not control people's behavior, others think otherwise. In my opinion, laws modify the individual's comportment.
First of all, laws must be devised to constrain people's wrongdoings. It is certain to say that when someone is about to commit a crime, laws must exist to stop the criminals. It is right to state that persons' behavior vary from country to country and each country has its own law system; however, their laws ought to be consistent according to the misbehavior.
Moreover, there are different types of laws for different circumstances; however, in the end, they all achieve the same goal, the prevention of crime. For instance, there are laws related to the work environment, for example to protect the employees from exploitation in the work place.
Furthermore, there are others related to the cyber attacks. They try to prohibit hackers from hacking one's computer.
Finally, persons' behavior often change in reaction to the law. If some individuals do not change their way of life, they will certainly be punished for misconduct.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 304, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...herwise. In my opinion, laws modify the individuals comportment. First of all, laws must ...
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Line 2, column 202, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...he criminals. It is right to state that persons behavior vary from country to country a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 8.36945812808 12% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 207.0 242.827586207 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12077294686 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80433846383 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589371980676 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 379.143842365 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7246385798 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5384615385 104.977214359 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206159032787 0.242375264174 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733005494996 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735295778623 0.071462118173 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105328109069 0.151781067708 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754646042588 0.0609392437508 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 12.6369458128 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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