Some people argue Laws changes human behavior whereas some disagree. Do you agree with it? Argumentative / persuasive/ opinionated type essay
Laws are ways over which governments have control about their population. They are endorsed to fend off the chaos, hence authorities have the absolute management of their population. Although some people believe that laws do not control people's behavior, others think otherwise. In my opinion, laws modify the individual's comportment.
First of all, laws must be devised to constrain people's wrongdoings. It is certain to say that when someone is about to commit a crime, laws must exist to stop the mugger. It is right to state that persons' behavior vary from country to country and each country has its own law system, but their laws ought to be consistent according to the misbehavior.
Moreover, there are different types of laws for different circumstances however, in the end, they all achieve the same goal, the prevention of thief success. For instance, there are laws related to the work environment. This is the case when an employee is trying to pull someone's leg. Furthermore, there are others related to the cybernetic attacks. They try to prohibit hackers from entering one's computer.
Finally, individual's behaviors are always taking turns due to the laws' concerns. If some individuals do not change the life way, they will certainly be punished from misconduct.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 311, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Line 2, column 198, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...p the mugger. It is right to state that persons behavior vary from country to country a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1075.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 208.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16826923077 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78689860045 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2992803662 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7857142857 104.977214359 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8571428571 20.9669160288 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.25397266985 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 2.91625615764 309% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19767146558 0.242375264174 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064878675437 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701824694325 0.071462118173 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119359310855 0.151781067708 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532724876278 0.0609392437508 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.9458128079 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.11 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.5 Out of 90
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