Some say that music is as important as other subjects in schools to promote learning in children life. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.
Music has a very important role in children life. It should be taught in every school because as math, history and others lessons it helps them to deal with some issues.
Firstly, music works in conjunction with the development of some skills. This is just a connection about learning process that it possible to happen. For example, some children do not know that they are good at math and learning music helps them to pinpoint such abilities and use them in the future.
Secondly, the same connection is stated with the improvement of the brain. It was already confirmed by some researches that while children are listening to music, their brains work in an amazing way that shows children capacity of memorizing lots of informations. Therefore, they become capable of accomplishing many tasks. In addition, they also start to develop a good understanding of difficult situarions. Something that is said among family members becomes easy to cath. This is what we may call critical understanding.
Thirdly, it helps them to prevent some further ailments. Some children are already born with some diseases, especially brain diseases. Working on good development of the brain makes children to get rid of such problem.
Finally, music plays an important role in every day children life. And, it provides enough knowledge to overcome further duties.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, while, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 220.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14545454545 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73975929449 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618181818182 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9831042505 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.75 104.977214359 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.75 20.9669160288 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225738551626 0.242375264174 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698362359343 0.0925447433944 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735886101752 0.071462118173 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13696136067 0.151781067708 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523690652326 0.0609392437508 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 12.6369458128 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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