A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.
Factories are the places where people usually go to obtain food and other derivation of it. Even though some people may disagree with the desideratum of large factories nearby, others believe that it is better to have at least one big factory in town. This is due to the fact that if, fortuistouly, the is a lack of products in small markets, they will likely find their needs in large places. Despite the fact that there will be competitions, I tend to agree that the construction of large factory will merely bring up benefits.
First of all, it is safe to say that there will be many advantages. For example, the first one will be employment generation and consequently the growth of profits for the city will come. Furthermore, the trademark expansion around the city is likely to happen, conducting to the profits alike. No need to travel long distances to grab products, thus no need to use cars, decreasing the pollution in town.
Furthermore, another factor that will be benefitial for the community is the necessity of courses. The staff will have to take courses in many areas to provide the best possible support for clients. And such courses may be helpful further on in life.
However, the razing of green areas will be brought about, bringing up possible garbage nearby. Moreover, competition among small markets is probably to break out. This will benefit the clients but will be bad for markets owners.
Finally, it is clear to notice that the advantages over weigh the disadvantages. Besides, seeing in the long path, the advantages overcome the drawbacks of the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, as to, at least, for example, of course, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 271.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90036900369 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70743114641 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568265682657 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7444967559 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.0 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9375 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 5.45110844103 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0825870497621 0.236089414692 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0271492532871 0.076458572812 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292616896082 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0436431849187 0.150856017488 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412630730153 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.2 Out of 6.0
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