If you could ask a famous person one question, what would you ask? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
When I hear the word "famous person", an image of a person who is very successful in his/her business or career and is prestigious in the specific domain, such as Donald Trump, Mark Zuckerberg, etc., comes to my mind immediately. If I could have a chance to ask them one question, I would ask them how they achieve great success in their works. I will explain my two reasons in the following paragraphs.
First of all, there are countless ways to success, but it has some principles can be followed. Although following in famous people's footsteps doesn't mean that we can be as successful as them, we can still learn a lot from them. Their precious experience can always teach and inspire us. In my case, as a graduate student studying in computer science, I love to read the profile articles on those who are prominent in the technology domain. It inspires me a lot to know how they think or how they come to new ideas that no one has done before. After noting that most famous applications are created from the intention to solve little problems, I became more conscious of the environment around me and tried to solve little problems using my programming skills. I hope I would create something helpful to change this world and make the world a better place one day.
Secondly, People are usually jealous of others' achievements and regard them as flukes, and I'm no exception. By asking the question to famous people, it helps us to realize how much effort they put in, and stop to take their hard work as lucky results. For instance, I was once a cynical person, and I thought my classmate's great performance in a programming competition was totally a fluke. I spent all my weekend to prepare for the competition while I still lost to him. But finally, I heard from other classmates that he had prepared for it six months ago. On the contrary, I had only practiced for a weekend. Of course, I would lose the competition. From then on, I've never been doubted of other's achievements.
In summary, there are several valuable questions can be asked to those famous people. We can always learn a lot from successful people. "How to be successful" is the most crucial question I could ask for me to get closer to success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, while, as to, for instance, in summary, of course, such as, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67424242424 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77652290296 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580808080808 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6919467903 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1428571429 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09523809524 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160543944889 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436703514476 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585495902837 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11022878847 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549954928721 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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