if you don’t make sure that other people (especially influential people or your employer) know about your strengths and accomplishments, you will never get successful in life.
Nowadays, people learn countless skills in schools or in universities in order to become prepared for their future job. However, some people have problems showing what they are able to do. They might think that introducing them as an ostentatious person is not necessary, or it may change others’ attitude towards them by. I personally believe that if someone is not able to show his abilities, he cannot be successful in life. In what follows, I will try to pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
First, one should bear in mind that in today’s world, it is so easy for employers to find a person with a required skill. So someone in a job can easily be replaced by someone else provided that he doesn’t distinguish himself properly. To illustrate this, suppose an employee working for a big company who has numerous skills related to his tasks, but he is not able to use them in practice. Such companies are always bombarded with lots of job requests by other unemployed persons. So it’s obvious that his boss will soon decide to substitute him with the one who he thinks is better whenever he feels the current employee doesn’t do well in his tasks.
Secondly, being sure that others are aware of one’s talents and strengths, has a great impact on his self-confidence. Knowing the fact that others believe a person’s abilities and observing their praises can induce him to think that he can do well in his job.one can also be encouraged to improve his skills in order to attract more attentions from his boss for instance. So this can undoubtedly enhance the quality of his work as well as increasing his self-esteem.
Finally, someone, who can show the abilities he has, obtains the opportunity to be offered more jobs. So it provides a variety of choices which lead to a favorable choice and thus a successful future. A relevant study recently conducted in my country reveals that getting successful in a job, has a direct relation with the amount of satisfaction that the person derives from the job.
To sum up, the aforementioned reasons lead us to this conclusion that no matter how much a person is dexterous in a task, if he cannot show those abilities, he cannot be successful in future. Considering this fact, I strongly suggest that some basic instructions relevant to this issue be taught in schools in addition to required skills. This will undoubtedly help the next generation overcome this issue. In addition, it might be worthy for people having this problem to attend special classes in which a psychologist tries to help them overwhelm the mentioned problem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2178.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 443.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9164785553 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87827291142 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539503386005 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 671.4 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3428716915 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.9 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.15 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101218145875 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343776469047 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0223697863278 0.0737576698707 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0601303458479 0.150856017488 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258153605162 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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