Imagine that there is a large piece of vacant land in your town. What is the best way to make use of it? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Introduction
In the modern era, rarely, there is a vacant area that can be used to build a facility profitable for the community. If there is such a place in my neighbourhood, I would like to build a sports centre equipped with swimming pool and jogging track. I believe it will be benefitted the people for several reason I would like to elaborate more in the next paragraph.
First, there is a need of a place to exercise in the convoluted area. My hometown is crowded with skyscraper and town office, therefore, we have a lack of a facility that comfortable, safe, and affordable to work out. The meagre of the sports centre make the dweller of my hometown have aversion to work out hence the declining of quality of life. The lack of exercise is detrimental to the people.
Second, the sports centre where equipped with swimming pool will benefit the senior citizen in my hometown. It is a fact that elderly need a low impact and a high-intensity workout. This will be provided by workout regimen in swimming pool since the water lessens the workload of the joints and the muscles. The insufficient quantity of empty land contributed to the sparse number of swimming pool because of they most likely unable to build the facility in their backyard.
Lastly, the gym membership is expensive. The place that adequate to facilitated high-quality exercise is very costly. It is reserved for affluent people and the middle-class community would unlikely use it. Additionally, the gym usually located in a downtown area where there is no subway line or unreachable by other public transportation.
I personally believe that a sports centre will benefit the community immeasurably. All the things considered, the sports centre would become a celebrated addition to my hometown
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 296, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'several reasons'.
Suggestion: several reasons
...ve it will be benefitted the people for several reason I would like to elaborate more in the n...
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Line 6, column 399, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because they' instead.
Suggestion: because they
...d to the sparse number of swimming pool because of they most likely unable to build the facilit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, lastly, second, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 299.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98327759197 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94481557871 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511705685619 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0999954337 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6470588235 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5882352941 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41176470588 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0528477100393 0.236089414692 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0158743458935 0.076458572812 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0265228668561 0.0737576698707 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0282250669224 0.150856017488 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216525624757 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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