Imagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting. The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect in your opinion, which of the following is the best thing to do?
* Interrupt and correct the mistake right away
* Wait until the class or meeting is over and the people are gone, and then talk to the teacher or meeting leader
* Say nothing
There is no shortage of debate about how to respond when an authority figure, such as a teacher or boss, says something inaccurate. In my opinion, I would point out in the same meeting or during the class, the mistake made by the person right away. I feel this way for two main reasons that I will explain in the following essay.
Firstly, I think it is important to state a correct concept if someone has said something I know is wrong, so that other students don’t learn something incorrectly. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. Approximately 10 years ago, I remember being in a history class and my teacher was talking about World War II. I noticed he said wrong a specific date. Moreover, he continued explaining the timeline of the facts based on this. When I noticed that something was wrong, I did not need to think so much, and I just raised my hand and told him he had confused the year and which was correct. As a result, all my classmates could learn properly the topic as well as my teacher was glad that I had pointed the error out for him.
Secondly, it is a good way for the teacher or a boss can notice that you are aware of the lesson or the subject being discussed in the meeting. For instance, when I was working for a marketing business, I needed some feedback from my coworkers. The way I as leader, was able to know that they understood the presentation being exposed, occurred when one colleague told me I was wrong. After that, everyone realized it was OK to talk out loud in a secure environment. Therefore, they assumed it is correct to quickly discuss incorrect thoughts.
In conclusion, it is fine to tell a teacher or a group leader when they have made an error. This is because all the others present can correct the fault and because it allows us to have a respectful interchange of ideas.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, such as, talking about, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49704142012 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63220514093 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565088757396 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7756368744 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4117647059 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8823529412 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4117647059 5.45110844103 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153473509373 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461960561045 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523112368551 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972219190525 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594240211506 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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