Nowadays, the factories' construction is a controversial topic. Millions of people disagree with that. one of the contrary persons with this destructive structure is me. I have several reasons why I feel like this that I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, factories will contaminate water, soil, and air on a large scale. Actually, factories are not committed to preserving the environment and they are willing to gain more financial benefits and do not pay money to use new technologies to relieve pollution. as a result of this; they contaminate natural resources; if these resources become polluted, the restoration of that is hard and needs a long time; therefore, this processes are inherently unsafe and have different consequences to public health. My personal experiences are compelling examples of this. Near my home city, there is a big factory that refines oil. Every night they open their filters, and their emissions contaminate the air as well as contaminate water by leaching out their fluid left. In our city cancer is high and recent studies indicate that this is because of this factory.
Secondly, building factories in cities are caused overflooding of populations to factory sites and causes different consequences. One of the results of this phenomenon is increasing the price of the land and home in that realm, so the housing price goes to skyrocketing price and impresses the native population, and caused younger families can no longer afford homes. Plus, increased demand for public services. Includes collecting trash, school bus, and new roads. All of these cause more traffic problems. For instance, in my city, the price of a home becomes fifty percent raise after building the factory, and my sister could not buy a home and be forced to rent one; also, our home town became more crowded.
In a nutshell, I disagree entirely with factory construction in our city for the sake of that it will pollute the environment and reduce social and economic facilities. I am off that factories should be constructed outside the cities considering environmental protocols.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'factories'' or 'factory's'?
Suggestion: factories'; factory's
Nowadays, the factories construction is a controversial topic. ...
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Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
... Millions of people disagree with that. one of the contrary persons with this destr...
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Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
... new technologies to relieve pollution. as a result of this; they contaminate natu...
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Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is because of this factory. Secondly, building factories in cities are caused ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, i feel, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15697674419 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90091810498 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59011627907 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.2188514555 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3684210526 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1052631579 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57894736842 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142854084697 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436584719876 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319090329255 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840913964309 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171354152645 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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