In today's fast-paced and technology-oriented world, robots and computers play a vital role in making progress and life easier. In today's state-of-the-art world computers help people triumph over obstacles and achieve success. A controversial question regarding this issue is whether applying robots and computers to live would have a better and good outcomes or otherwise. Some people believe that, computers make life easy and pleasure than it was in past, we can do a lot of stuff simultaneously, whereas others disagree. I am of the opinion that, the more technology would be progressing, the more the world would be better place to live and for next generation for some reasons. In ensuing lines, I will address the most discernible reasons.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that, utilizing technology to our lives such as computers and robots, people and governments can make money as much as they invest money on developing the technology. In fact, it is possible to do a huge work and also project in the same time and making money in every one of them. To illustrate this, supposed a person or a corporation creating a program computer-based, so they by means of advertisement and initial investment on it, would sell it just one time to many organization, business and other foundation, and make money every time without and extra work. As you can see, by using computers as well as technology, an organization or even a person would be able to make money in same time in every country in the world.
Another noteworthy aspect that should be reflected in this explanation is that, employing computer, one can do a substantial project in a small time and having remarkable progress. Needless to say, in science computers play a momentous role to do every work which a human could not do precisely and correctly. For instance, one application computer in science predicate climate and also global warming, to be more specific, by congregating data in station in throughout the world, and simulation them by computer, thus scientists are able to say this fact that the temperature of earth is increasing. Therefore, by means of technology in science, our world is developing dramatically toward better performance.
In light of these crucial reasons, I have strictly come to believe that, computers and robots lead to we can save time and be in side of our family more than it was in past. Given the above, computers and robots not only can lead to make money in same time, but also by using them in science can make a notable progress in a small time. That is why I believe that computer is the best creation of human being in whole history.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...make life easy and pleasure than it was in past, we can do a lot of stuff simultaneousl...
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Line 3, column 513, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun organization seems to be countable; consider using: 'many organizations'.
Suggestion: many organizations
...t on it, would sell it just one time to many organization, business and other foundation, and mak...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
... in side of our family more than it was in past. Given the above, computers and robots ...
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Line 7, column 302, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'notable progress'.
Suggestion: notable progress
... also by using them in science can make a notable progress in a small time. That is why I believe ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, for instance, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2219.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 454.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88766519824 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96443449548 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486784140969 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 711.9 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.7948048339 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.529411765 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7058823529 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309221780064 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104779707701 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479587122142 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194986903704 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636511151241 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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