It is obvious that one of the most important goals of each society is to improve educating students. They are trying to use innovative approaches to training children in order to help them to achieve their scientific objectives. I strongly believe that it is easier to educate children today than it was in the past. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss my views using some reasons and examples.
I think nowadays with the development of technology, people have access to more educational facilities and services than the past. Thus, educating children has much less difficulties than it had in the past. Governments all over the world are trying to fund educational institutions. They spend a lot of money to improve educational system in order to increase children’s knowledge which will be useful for their future life and their society. For example, in my county, many rural districts deprived from educational facilities in the past, but now children in these areas have access to proper educational services.
Moreover, I believe that although the existence of novel devices such as smart phones, computer games, social media, and so on has caused children to spend their time using them, children can be taught to use these devices effectively. In this way, employing these devices not only has not caused harmful damage to their education but also benefits them and will be useful for them. As a result, they can use these facilities in their free times for pleasure; also, they can use them to help them to learn more. For instance, when i was a student, I used my cell phone to record lectures and take necessary photos in the classroom. Also, I could connect the Internet in break time and search for required information, which would be helpful for me. Consequently, if children can manage themselves to use the technology efficiently, it will have positive effects on their education and accelerate this process.
Finally, nowadays children have access to too much educational facilities such as Internet, electronic books, online educational networks, etc. which will be beneficial for students. It helps them to better and easier learn new thing and are able to get a lot of information about various issues.
To sum up, if children are taught to properly use these devices and facilities, using them not only will not harm their education but also positively influence improvement of their training. Therefore, today technological progress considerably has made educating children easier compared to the past.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun difficulties is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...past. Thus, educating children has much less difficulties than it had in the past. G...
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Line 5, column 532, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... them to learn more. For instance, when i was a student, I used my cell phone to ...
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Line 9, column 302, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g children easier compared to the past.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i think, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2138.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16425120773 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8539155883 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507246376812 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 676.8 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0591647674 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.9 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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