Innovations has a positive effect on our society. Do you agree or disagree with the following statment?
In modern era of 21 century everything is going to be more thechnological and innovative. Some people think that in the future innovations and thecnology will mainly have a positive effect on our society. Nevertheless, others have an oppoite thoughts. Both these positions are likely to have the proponents who would most probably have grounded and reasonable considirations behind the preferences. Among the many choices we make throughout life, we may one day also find ourselves caught in the dilemma of deciding whether innovations have a poitive or a negative effect on our humanity.As far as I am concerned I feel inclined to favor the position that inovations have a positive effect on our society. I feel this way for the following reasons, which I will exlopre in the following essay.
To begin with, innovation allows organizations to stay relevant in the competitive market, it also plays an important role in economic growth. The ability to resolve critical problems depends on new innovations and especially developing countries need it more than ever. Innovation enables problem solving and provides creative insight that allows every individual to look at things from a different perspective, regardless of whether someone is developing a new product, refreshing strategy or finding an original way to stay ahead of the competition.Therefor, I strongly belive that innovation can deliver significant benefits. It is one of the critical skills for achieving success in any business. It can help everyone to solve problems, generate profit, increase their market share and edge out competitors.
In addition to this the evolution of technology is beneficial to humans for several reasons. At the medical level, technology can help treat more sick people and consequently save many lives and combat very harmful viruses and bacteria. The invention of the computer was a very important point. Communication is thus enhanced, and companies can communicate more easily with foreign countries. Research is also simplified. Moreover, for companies, progress in implementing strategic technology trends is helping them save time and therefore, money. Exchanges are faster especially with the internet. Sales and purchases are now facilitated and possible worldwide. This allows businesses to buy raw materials with discounts or at reduced prices. Similarly, global tourism has grown.
To sum up, it is safe to conclude that inovation has a lot of benefits, as inovation facilitate daily issues of humanity. Even though it have both advantages and disadvantages, I guess that the advantages overweight the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, look, may, moreover, nevertheless, similarly, so, therefore, thus, i feel, i guess, in addition, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2228.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4742014742 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18261020566 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611793611794 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 730.8 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 75.9054979068 48.9658058833 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8695652174 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6956521739 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30434782609 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165258746033 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355404737448 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537725080699 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769499521882 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724575183857 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 58.1214874552 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.01818996416 125% => OK
difficult_words: 142.0 86.8835125448 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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