It is better to go on a trip by oneself than to take a group tour with a guide.
Travelling by yourself gives you the freedom and can be a really good experience but I dont think it gives you the most import thing i.e. the assurance of security you need whenever you are travelling to a foreign place. There is always that worry feeling or nervousness accompanying you. So I truly feel that rather than travelling solo, one should always travel with a group or take along a guide with him/her while travelling.
Travelling with a group gives you that satisfaction and always gives you a feeling of calmness in the journey. Whether going on a short 1-2 day trip or even going for a long vacation, travelling along with someone gives you the opportunity to create strong bonds with the people and create memories that would last lifetime. For instance I remember when I travelled with a group of my friends to UK for 10 days. I remember the fun we had together, the memories we created. I remember them even now and I definitely feel that the feeling of togetherness that one experiences during the trip is one of the best feelings and one cannot experience it while travelling alone.
Nowadays we hear so many stories of tourists getting scammed in different countries. The solo tourists are the main victims of these kind of scams and these scammers often target the solo travellers as it is pretty easy to fool them when they are alone. So, I feel if you prefer to travel alone then too, you should always have a local guide accompanying you. The local guides are experienced people and they often choose what is best for you. I also remember when we visited the Taj Mahal in India and hired a local guide there. He was such an artless person and the historic knowledge he possessed about the monuments there was immense. He gave us so much intrinsic data about these monuments that we got a very clear picture and a clear understanding about the Taj Mahal and the Red Fort which we would have never got if we travelled alone. I definitely benefited from the knowledge he gave us as it helped me later in one of my history projects.
So, to conclude I feel that travelling in a group or with a guide has far more benefits than travelling alone. The sense of security, the joy of company and the ability of understanding the place even better are some of the advantages that you get when you travel in a group or with a guide.
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...understanding the place even better are some of the advantages that you get when you travel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, then, while, for instance, i feel, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1931.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55424528302 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57148487986 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471698113208 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 618.3 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0013354529 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.277777778 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5555555556 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167243734438 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588298074173 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737785103104 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125855782698 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633573430008 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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