Every individuals love travelling. Either with a group or solo, or with a tourist guide ,we love travelling. Although using guides to visit makes our trip easier, I strongly believe travelling without them would be much fun. As travelling is not just visiting places casually, but also being adventerous, it is important to visit by oneself to have extreme fun. I will try to prove my standing in following passages.
First, when we are travelling by self we are not bound by any institutional policies of travelling agencies. We entertain more freedom while travelling solo. During the whole trip we are only under control of us, so it helps us to get more fun. I remember a personal situation from my trip. We were visiting base camp of tallest mountain: Mount Everest. We hired a guide and set off our tour in the guide's vehicle. During our trip there were lots of places on the way that fascinated me. I wanted to take photos of these places but because company policies didnot allow to stop tourist bus randomly, I couldnot takes these photos. This cause dissatisfactio in me and I didn't enjoy the trip much. Had we taken our own vehicle and travelled by oneself the situation would have been different. May be I could have enjoyed freedom and my trip might be fun.
Second, guides would takes us to some specified locations only. Travelling guides have pre-specified routes for travelling. They would only take us to those place which come under their route. While following those routes, it is high probability we might miss some important ones. However, travelling oneself makes us able to perdetermine our routes. We have freedom to choose where to go and where not to. This prevents missing of places we are desperate to visit. I remember my time in India where we were travelling to Simla through a travelling agency. We had planned to visit several important places but since these places didn't come under travelling routes of the agency, we missed them all. Thus, travelling by one might have avoided these compromisations.
Finally, travelling by self saves alot of our money. As guides would take extra charges and we have to pay for their room rents, the trip would turn out ot be more expensive. Also, we have to live in those hotels prebooked by guides. During these conditions, it is higher possibility that guides would be asking for tips. This would make our trip even more expensive. But, if we are alone we can adjust our needs according to our budgets. We would be saving alot of money and tips as well. One time I went to visit Mustang in Nepal. I went through tourist agency and took a guide. My total expenses was about 400$ per person. After a week one of my friend went on his own. I asked him about his expenses and found out that there was significant difference. At that time I realized guides are waste of money.
Therefore, travelling on own is fruitful than with a guide. It makes our trip cheaper and donot restrict us from doing whatever we want. Also, we wouldnot miss any important locations as we do not need to stick to stupid agency policy. Moreover, travelling on own makes our trip more exciting and more adventurous. As we have to be responsible of ourself, these fear also grant different type experience. Hence I belive travelling oneself is a way of experiencing newness.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
Every individuals love travelling. Either wit...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...a group or solo, or with a tourist guide ,we love travelling. Although using guide...
^^
Line 2, column 318, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the tallest'.
Suggestion: of the tallest
...rom my trip. We were visiting base camp of tallest mountain: Mount Everest. We hired a gui...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 399, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'guides'' or 'guide's'?
Suggestion: guides'; guide's
...red a guide and set off our tour in the guides vehicle. During our trip there were lot...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 570, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'stopping'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: stopping
...t because company policies didnot allow to stop tourist bus randomly, I couldnot takes ...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 669, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
.... This cause dissatisfactio in me and I didnt enjoy the trip much. Had we taken our o...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 791, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: Maybe
...he situation would have been different. May be I could have enjoyed freedom and my tri...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 22, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'take'
Suggestion: take
...rip might be fun. Second, guides would takes us to some specified locations only. Tr...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 629, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...important places but since these places didnt come under travelling routes of the age...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 609, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$400'.
Suggestion: $400
...ok a guide. My total expenses was about 400$ per person. After a week one of my frie...
^^^^
Line 4, column 626, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tal expenses was about 400$ per person. After a week one of my friend went on his own...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 405, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...r also grant different type experience. Hence I belive travelling oneself is a way of...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 94.0 43.0788530466 218% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2743.0 1977.66487455 139% => OK
No of words: 581.0 407.700716846 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72117039587 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90957651803 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62067057137 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 280.0 212.727598566 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481927710843 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 883.8 618.680645161 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 28.0 9.59856630824 292% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 45.0 20.6003584229 218% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.525310531 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.9555555556 100.406767564 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9111111111 20.6045352989 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.26666666667 5.45110844103 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 20.0 4.88709677419 409% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166022010667 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412287743253 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050954782946 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106616676647 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358866131933 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 11.7677419355 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
Every individuals love travelling. Either wit...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...a group or solo, or with a tourist guide ,we love travelling. Although using guide...
^^
Line 2, column 318, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the tallest'.
Suggestion: of the tallest
...rom my trip. We were visiting base camp of tallest mountain: Mount Everest. We hired a gui...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 399, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'guides'' or 'guide's'?
Suggestion: guides'; guide's
...red a guide and set off our tour in the guides vehicle. During our trip there were lot...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 570, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'stopping'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: stopping
...t because company policies didnot allow to stop tourist bus randomly, I couldnot takes ...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 669, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
.... This cause dissatisfactio in me and I didnt enjoy the trip much. Had we taken our o...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 791, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: Maybe
...he situation would have been different. May be I could have enjoyed freedom and my tri...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 22, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'take'
Suggestion: take
...rip might be fun. Second, guides would takes us to some specified locations only. Tr...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 629, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...important places but since these places didnt come under travelling routes of the age...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 609, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$400'.
Suggestion: $400
...ok a guide. My total expenses was about 400$ per person. After a week one of my frie...
^^^^
Line 4, column 626, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tal expenses was about 400$ per person. After a week one of my friend went on his own...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 405, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...r also grant different type experience. Hence I belive travelling oneself is a way of...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 94.0 43.0788530466 218% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2743.0 1977.66487455 139% => OK
No of words: 581.0 407.700716846 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72117039587 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90957651803 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62067057137 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 280.0 212.727598566 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481927710843 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 883.8 618.680645161 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 28.0 9.59856630824 292% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 45.0 20.6003584229 218% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.525310531 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.9555555556 100.406767564 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9111111111 20.6045352989 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.26666666667 5.45110844103 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 20.0 4.88709677419 409% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166022010667 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412287743253 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050954782946 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106616676647 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358866131933 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 11.7677419355 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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