It is better to have a broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specifc subject.
The world changes every minute of the day. It is fine to keep up with the news and the trends of the day or the moment., but it is imperative to be an expert in your field of work.
First, companies that are at the top, requires professionals with the abilities to keep up their standards. Nowadays, companies are looking for employees that can push the company to higher limits. For this reason, applicants are required to have completed studies like PHds in their field of work. In addition, these employees will be retributed with better job salaries and better benefits.
Second, let’s think for instance, in the field of medicine. We find ourselves seeking even less the need to go the general practioner. Instead, we search the advised of the expert in the field we need help. For example, two years ago, I had problems with my left knee after an accident in my bicycle, I knew I had to find an orthopedics to fix my knee problem. In addition, more and more people trust the world of that doctor that has been acreditated in his field of expertise.
Last, in the field of science is where we notice even more how much physics experts search for knowledge into trying to understand the mysteries of the universe. It is mindblowing how the come up with new concepts, like black matter, black holes, etc, these ideas are only possible if the person prepares himself to face these challenges of modern physics. On the contrary, if you do not prepare yourself, you will end up just be one more science teaching student at a middle school level.
To summarize, it pays to prepare yourself for the current job market. The road might be long and difficult, but in the end the rewards will be sweeter.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, so, for example, for instance, in addition, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 304.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64144736842 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52319571585 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7845761571 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1875 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0348563027127 0.236089414692 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0112057795592 0.076458572812 15% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0219019622951 0.0737576698707 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0169240344052 0.150856017488 11% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021850288562 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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