It is better to have lots of different friends than it is to have just a few friends.
I strongly disagree with this statement. It is not better to have lots of different friends. In fact, it is much better to have just a few friends.
The main reason why it is better to have just a few friends is that you can really count on them when you need them. If you have lots of different friends, you don't know any one of them very well. So, if you have a problem, they might not be interested in helping you. But if you have just a few friends, then you become very close to them, and they become very close to you. So, when you have a problem and really need a friend, your close friends will be there for you.
Here is an example. I personally only have a few close friends. Last month I was really sick, and couldn't leave my apartment. I called my friend and told her how I was feeling. Here is what she did for me. She went to the grocery store and bought all the ingredients for chicken soup. Then, she came directly over to my apartment and cooked chicken soup for me. Then she sat and talked with me while I ate the soup. I felt so much better, and I felt so lucky to have such a close friend.
So that is one reason why it is better to have a few friends. Another reason is that it is much easier to go on trips together. Let's say you have lots of friends, and you want to go on a trip. It's difficult to organize them: you might have to rent a bus! On the other hand, if you have just a few close friends, you can just get in a car together. I did that with my friends last weekend. We got in a car and went to the beach. It was so much fun.
So I disagree with this statement. It's much better to have just a few close friends. When you're sick, they take care of you, and when you feel good and want to go on a trip, they can go with you.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, then, well, while, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.93036211699 4.8611393121 81% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.02756050999 2.67179642975 76% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.403899721448 0.524837075471 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.51630824373 79% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8236721601 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 52.2592592593 100.406767564 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.2962962963 20.6045352989 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 5.45110844103 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401534060324 0.236089414692 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147600412879 0.076458572812 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.181033040344 0.0737576698707 245% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.304734511914 0.150856017488 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159872656527 0.0645574589148 248% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.7 11.7677419355 31% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 92.12 58.1214874552 158% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.6 10.1575268817 35% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 4.63 10.9000537634 42% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.2 8.01818996416 65% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 86.8835125448 24% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 4.0 10.247311828 39% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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