It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another.
Nowadays, everyone wants to visit new places. When it comes to whether it is better to stay at the same location or not, opinions vary from person to person. However, I agree that it is more beneficial to stay at the same place rather than travel to several areas. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, people adjust to a lifestyle when they stay at a place. If people are asked to shift to another location, they will find it challenging to adapt to the new site. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. My college was very far from home and that place had a different culture. Although students at my college had the same mindset, the city as a whole was reserved. As a result, I found it very difficult to stay doing things that I had always wished to do at college, such as roaming around freely and attending parties. Consequently, I longed to return home and could not concentrate on studies. Had I studied at a college near my home, I would have got better grades.
Furthermore, living in the same place allows people to make strong bonds with people. In contrast, people who travel to various cities do not have strong connections. For instance, my friend lived in the same town throughout her childhood until her marriage. At her wedding, the entire neighborhood was present. Moreover, people also kept in touch with her after her marriage. Whenever she would come home, everyone would welcome her with open arms. This example demonstrates that people develop lifelong relationships while staying at the same place.
To sum up, people should consider living in the same city. This is because people get accustomed to a place and because it helps to develop strong relations within a locality.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 152, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'adapting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: adapting
...location, they will find it challenging to adapt to the new site. My personal experience...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, i feel, in contrast, such as, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 311.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71061093248 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57515120493 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56270096463 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.1512431902 48.9658058833 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.7619047619 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8095238095 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.04761904762 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109247337818 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0330231256368 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0296080149206 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0668508891721 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00842285792557 0.0645574589148 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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