Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In such a sophisticated world in which we live, people have been perpertually searching for factors that can make a significant contribution to having a prosperious life. In fact, There are numerious factors which have influence on our lives. One of such factors is the place we live. Consequently, due to its paramout importance, throughout history, resident has played a prevailing role in humans life. In this regard, there is a long-standing, heated debate among people about whether it is more beneficial to move from one place to another in our lives or choose a permanent place to reside. Some people are leading proponents of the claim that due to its merits such as bulding strong social network, staying is one place carries more weight. Nonetheless, from my own perspective, this statement is false. As a matter of fact, I wholeheartedly disagree with such people and strongly recommend that pople change their habitats over their lives. In the subsequent paragraphs, I will dleve into two conspucuous reasons in order to aptly elaboraste on my standpoint.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that it provides individuals with the opportunity to broaden their worldview and enrich their experiences. In other worlds, by changing your place, you are able to meet people from different backgrounds and costums which might help you improve your knowledge. To take a personal experience as an example, when I was studying for higher education in university, I studied in two different city exept my hometown. Folks of ach city gave me a fresh perspective. For example, i learned from Tabriz where is a industrial city about distinguishing skills related to my major, while from Mashhad that has a religious people about how to connect with my god and advantages of having good manners. Had I not Studied in different cities, I would have not had the chane to improve my information and knowledge.
Furthermore, although there may be some counterexamples of this allegation, it is established beyond doubt that as human beings we all burn and live once in this world, so it is better to get enjoyment out of life as much as possible. As a result, one of the effective ways is to probe and explore different places. The notworthy statistics, revealed by recent ground-breaking research conducted in our country, indicate that exploring different places, traveling in other words, is most favorable way based on individuals' conviction. Regurarly moving, therefore, can help us improve out mental health and overal well-being.
To wrap it up, contemplating all the aforementioned reasons, one soon realizes that all its demerits notwithstanding, moving and visting different places throughout out lives could not only increase our information but also can improve our overal well-being. It is anticipated that if people choose to inhabitat different places, they will have a prosperous life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...example, i learned from Tabriz where is a industrial city about distinguishing sk...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...r words, is most favorable way based on individuals conviction. Regurarly moving, therefore...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, nonetheless, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in fact, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2437.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 471.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17409766454 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10459447569 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55838641189 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 760.5 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4581693184 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.047619048 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213601308099 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577598859025 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553482554276 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116570984691 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374300890657 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 86.8835125448 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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