Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Whether to live in one place perennially or to move to new places occasionally is more and more concerned by people with the development of society and the economy. While some persons may exalt the virtue of experiencing something new by moving continually, I would like to vote to be sedentary in one place for primary three reasons.
In the first place, living in the same town for years are capable of providing us with more friendly neighborhoods. In essence, the progress of people becoming familiar with each other is a long run. Only after a few years of sharing food, greetings, and smiles will we build more trust in our neighbors and vice versa. If we just move into one community for a few months and move out quickly, we are not able to provide our neighbors with more opportunities to know mutually. The longer we live in one place, the more interactions with neighbors we will have, and the more friendly neighborhoods we will possess.
Moreover, being sedentary is able to provide us with more convenience. When we live in one place for a long time, we will become quite familiar with the district so that we can solve our daily problems more easily. For instance, if we know the position of the supermarket, it will no doubt save more our time to arrive there when we run out of living resources. Additionally, there might exist some situations in that we forget our keys at home. In this case, it is more convenient to solve this problem if we know whom we can call to help us, which is only available by living in one place for a rather long time.
Furthermore, it is well acknowledged that living in one place can give us a strong feeling of home. There is no doubt that the more familiar we are with one place, the more emotional connections we have with the place. To be more explicit, the feeling of missing the home of our childhood is the result of living a relatively long time during our growth and getting familiar with the external environment of one community and the internal environment of the house, which is what we call nostalgia. We can reinforce the feeling of relaxation and comfort that we attribute to the definition of home by being sedentary.
While some people are always talking about the freshness of moving occasionally, it is also possible to create freshness on our own by just living in one place. For instance, we can change the arrangement of furniture as well as we can change the colors of curtains, cushions, plates, and so on by our mood, which would definitely cost less money and time.
To put it into a nutshell, the advantages of living in one place for years overwhelm those of moving frequently. From my perspective, I would appreciate being sedentary for its virtues of more friendly neighborhoods, more convenience, and more emotional connections.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, no doubt, talking about, as well as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2332.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 495.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71111111111 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71684168287 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78016059416 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.432323232323 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 754.2 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2999724062 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.6 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148191357669 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682302009484 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510829917994 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104846426819 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311382495 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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