In a highly globalized world, it seems prevalent that people move from cities or towns to others. Although some people may believe that living in one place throughout their whole life is more attractive, I strongly contend that it is better for people to move from on place to another.
First, moving to various places can broaden people' horizon, which is invaluable in one's life. As is known to all, people can be more informed and open-minded if they have been to a lot of different places and acquaint with various cultures. This kind of experience certainly cannot be acquired if people live in one town or city through their life. For example, my grandfather Jack once lived in a small mounty town, which was far away from big cities and most of his families had not been to anywhere besides the local town. In order to open his scale, Jack moved to a larger city and then even to the capital of the country. After years of experiencing different lives in different places, my grandfather became knowledgable and open-minded.
Second, moving from places to places equips people with primitive skills that is essential to their future. To be specific, people can learn how to adapt to new environment by moving to new places and they can also acquire valuable ability like efficiently communicating. My own experience can be one apt example. When I first left my hometown and moved to another city for studying, I barely knew how to adapt to the totally new environment. However, after a months I had accustomed to the life in the city, such as translating in subways instead of riding bicycles and carrying an umbrella with me all the time in case rainy day. This skill of adaptation was of help when I moved to the capital city after my graduation and assisted me to overcome a lot of obstacles encountering in the new city.
To conclude, it is more beneficial for people to move from one place to another than to live in one place.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... people horizon, which is invaluable in ones life. As is known to all, people can be...
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Line 5, column 459, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a month' or simply 'months'?
Suggestion: a month; months
...totally new environment. However, after a months I had accustomed to the life in the cit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, may, second, so, then, for example, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67930029155 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63227689908 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527696793003 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3542094734 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8666666667 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.426562779635 0.236089414692 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151267234922 0.076458572812 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118614939367 0.0737576698707 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.326855700799 0.150856017488 217% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109740419316 0.0645574589148 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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