Which of the following people do you think need the government's financial support most?
A.people over 70 years old
B. B.young families with children
C. C.people who lost their jobs
The government's financial support situation is an important issue and gains a lot of attention from the citizens. Some people believe that the government revenue should be spent on people who lost their jobs or some young families with little kids. However, I believe that people over 70 years old need the financial support most.
To begin with, unlike the young people who are able to make their living on their own, the elder people cannot earn money by themselves any more. Thus, they need the government's help. To be specific, the elders are too old to work. Moreover, in most cases, those elder people's families are not wealth enough to support them and some of their children might not be responsible for taking care of them. So the elder people have no one to rely on, they can only count on the government. Considering those elder people had devoted themselves to develop the country, the government has the duty to support them.
Although some people may say that government should also support young families with children, since it is real hard for them to sustain their life with low income. Not to mention that the raising a child can cost a fortune to a family that has low or even average income. However, such young families are composed with healthy adults who can work and earn money on their own, which is totally different from the situation that the elder people are in.
Besides, some people argue that the government financial support is as important to people who lost their job are as to the elders because both of them do not have income. On the other hand, the people who lost their jobs will found a job in the future so they can solve their own financial problem, which contradicts the elder people's situation since they cannot earn money anymore. In addition, people who lost their jobs usually have some saving and the companies that expelled them would give them some compensation.
To conclude, the elder people over 70 years old need the government’s financial support most.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, in addition, in most cases, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7994269341 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3411162467 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458452722063 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.9 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2158855021 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.6875 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8125 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.561579391385 0.236089414692 238% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.218314258731 0.076458572812 286% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138608041638 0.0737576698707 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.390934058642 0.150856017488 259% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931282944007 0.0645574589148 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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