It is better to make friends with intelligent people than with the people who have a good sense of humor.
Having a glimpse of contemporary society, where most citizens are under too much pressure with the speed of normal lives accelerating dramatically, people have a burning desire to express their feelings and release largely depending on getting along with friends, going hiking or having a cup of coffee and so forth. But when it comes to which kind of friends is better choice, viewpoints of different people may divert from one to another. To illustrate, some may assert that intelligent guys would be preference for they would be able to offer you some valuable advice and help you get through troubles. However, as far as I am concerned, I prefer to express my appreciation of people with a good sense of humor.
Initially, with this kind of friends around, citizens would easily empty their mind, getting rid of unpleasant things. Their sense of humor, generated naturally with their words, motion and attitude, will conduct a positive effect to humans at their vicinity, making you unwind and further possessing an optimistic and enthusiastic emotion. Personally, with these merits, people would face problems and arduous condition confidently. Take my friend Monica, a humorous girl at my university, as an example. Monica is that kind of person who could always have a good sense of humor, whenever even encountering whatever puzzle it is. Comparing to her attitude, I was the person who would get confused and upset faced with tiny problem. Fortunately, Monica will amuse me and tell me keep faith and never listen to anyone who said I could not or I should not, which really bring the sunlight into my heart. Accordingly, I can still remember her warm and pure smile, when dealing with any problems now.
Admittedly, intelligent people would give their friends insight to a certain thing. To elaborate, if people were stuck into a severe situation or ran into a problem, intelligent friends would help them find the sticking point hide it and patiently teach them the methods and solutions to it, averting them from this type of puzzle in the future. While as a matter of fact, plausible as it sounds, the view above does not hold water. Since in reality, the harsh situation people confronting usually could not be understood and sympathize. As a result, intelligent as our friends are, they cannot offer their aid, merely watching you, sorrow in deep heart.
Considering what I discussed above, making friends with a humor man or woman, I think, would be a better option.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, however, if, may, really, so, still, thus, while, i think, kind of, as a matter of fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2085.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01201923077 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66628911282 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.5183484286 48.9658058833 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.833333333 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413971382306 0.236089414692 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118737694792 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774502758882 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244306255206 0.150856017488 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580987813892 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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