A government should focus its budget more on young children education than universities
I totally disagree young children’s education needs more budget from a government. I insist this fund is supposed to put on universities.
Young children education does matter for a kid whose characters have not been patterned finally and should be carved for a long time. But an enough number of money has it possessed. Those parents offer Money, then the government offers Money, investment and donation from whole society offers Money. All Money there is. However, it is not going to the end. Policies provide their school lands cheap and remarkable, traffic laws with special roads and guards of their safety of food and lives. What about universities with all resources flow to a place like kindergarten? Its shorts of researches, professors’ salary, equipments for academics and teaching, these face the increasing number of students. What’s more, comparing to young children the graduated have to settle some problems themselves. Their family might make all their efforts to send them to the college for many of them. But still the way extends ahead and they must go ahead. If there are sponsored projects that drive from whichever provided to young children education above, college students will live easier and focus on their major with complete concentration. `
As for a government, its budget is more worthy to be used for college students for the reason that it is the high-quality college education supports the normal operation of the entire society as the bridge connecting the campus and the society. Whereas for primary education children’s behavior patterns, thinking modes and things like these would be altered in the long period of time by any accident possibly. Whatever the education does, there are a lot of causes unpredictable and inevitable-mostly derive from these seeds own-leading young trees grow out of our expectation. On the other hand this indeterminacy is less when investment is put on the university students.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, so, still, then, whereas, as for, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28888888889 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96708405771 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622222222222 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.466514633 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5555555556 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265921101174 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661495487658 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07881686146 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192670786586 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248221279415 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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