Government should spend money on children's education rather than universities
The government is a part of developing society. Nowadays, government has been working on every issue of the country. Among the all of issues, the big issue is to give best education to the children. Somewhere, government has done best efforts to increase the education of children. Although the plethora of people hold the opinion that government should spend money on education on every young children, I think that spend money on university is also important. I feel way because of few reasons which I will explore in following essay.
First of all, it is important to give attention towards extra curriculum activities in university. In modern era, students are capable of doing study as well as extra activities. The government should spend money to increase the equipment which are useful for students to do extra curriculum activities. For example, in sports, government should give scholarship to the students, who are able to participate in international competition. Other that this, government should try to implement some other activities rather than study. This will help to students to improve their skills in various subjects.
Secondly, an improvement in education system is also necessary. On other hand, good education system in school is also compulsory, but children have to learn about subjects in school, which is easier for them, because they do not have to apply in job after schooling. Therefore, university's education is more important. The government should improve the learning techniques. For instance, If teachers are not good learner for students, students cannot get good education. Eventually, it affects their future.
Finally, government should build more universities, students get more option to choose their career. If there are more universities or more sits are available for students, then they will be able to earn in their future. This will also increase the economy of country, whereas, more people are educated in country. It can decrease the number of jobless people. However, there are many private schools are available for young children, so they are able to pursue their study.
By the way of conclusion, based on above arguments, I believe that government should spend more money in universities rather than in young children education. This is because it will enhance the education quality and student’s skills as well as their opportunities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: give the best
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Suggestion: done the best
...the children. Somewhere, government has done best efforts to increase the education of ch...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ucation. This is because it will enhance the education quality and student's...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, as well as, by the way, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.0752688172 322% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2034.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33858267717 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89438603727 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48031496063 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 636.3 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7447469007 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.36 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.24 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.96 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382780876472 0.236089414692 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104461394914 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121538593716 0.0737576698707 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240518626122 0.150856017488 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122311151439 0.0645574589148 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.1 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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