parents should give money to children if they get high grade in school. Agree or disagree
There are many ways to encourage the children for study. The parents use the different ideas to motivate their children for get good grade. Either they give money to them or by amazing gifts. Although the plethora of people believes that it is not appropriate way for them, I think that if children get good grade constantly, than no other way is better than this. I feel this way for few reasons which I will explore in following essay.
First of all, to encourage the children by giving money will be best way because they will able to get good marks in their future. Parents know the weakness and strength of their children, so they are able to take decision of their children's life. By this they can make the bright future of child, because child will do more hard work to get high grades. This habit of doing hard work will be turns into great achievement in their life. To illustrate this, when I was child, my father gave me money or gifts whenever I got high grades, so it had helped me to get high marks till university. I got first rank in college even though my father did not tell me that he would give me money if will get high marks, because at that age I understand that this is inevitable to having a bright future.
Secondly, parents teach the children to how to use pocket-money. Off spring age is very sensitive and growing age. In this age parents can teach their children to handling of money and use it in appropriate way. This will help in future to manage their finance. When they become adult, it will be not new for them. So, there are several benefits by giving money to the children also like use it in things which are necessary, and do not use it where things are not priority.
However, if children use that money in harmful ways for them, then it could be dangerous for them. Sometime parents cannot give focus on their children that where they use this money. For example, children influenced by fast food advertisement on television. So, they prefer to by that which is not good for their health. Parents should become alert for this and give time to their children to make understand them.
By the way of conclusion, based on arguments explored above, I am of the opinion that, Offer money to juvenile to encourage them to get good grades or give money them after they get high marks will be great for them in their future, and they can also learn good skills.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'be the best'.
Suggestion: be the best
...urage the children by giving money will be best way because they will able to get good ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, as to, for example, i feel, i think, by the way, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1973.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 439.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49430523918 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28124811527 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.437357630979 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.9 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4833440843 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7826086957 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0869565217 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324682773895 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114445074915 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781409814246 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211668513809 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216274324841 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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