Is it better to wait for one's dream job or get the first job that comes along?
Opportunities for getting a job doesn't happen that many times and some people believe that once each individual have that opportunity, they should seize that and take the job right away. Personally speaking I agree with this idea and I feel this way for the following reasons.
To begin with, it is clear that in today's world no one can survive without money and it will be too risky to put on hold or refuse a job opportunity. Sure some people van survive for one or two months without getting paid. But, it is unclear that when will the new job opportunity be available. Also by that time this current opportunity may be lost forever. This has happend to one of my friends. He really needed money for renting and food but he was reluctant whether to take a job at a restaurant, which wasn't his specialty, or wait and see if his favourite job ,accounting, be available. He took my advice and tried that job and he was able to pay for his rent and food and actually now he owns a restaurant. Moreover, he didn't receive an opportunity to become an accountant. So if you had not taken that job, he wouldn't have been able to pay for his rent and food.
Moreover, one possible action for each person is to take the current job opportunity right away and still look for new jobs or at least wait if any new opportunities came up. So, you can work until you find something more suitable for you, and then decide if you want to carry on your current job or switch to the new opportunity. I remember once I accepted to work for a start-up company in power system, although I wasn't happy with that job and I was looking for another type of job, which could be more suitable for me. I took that job and still Looked for new opportunities, and after several months of searching I found my perfect job and I decided to switch to that.
In conclusion, if people have the opportunity to get a job, they shouldn't hesitate and they should seize the opportunity right away. Because nowadays, no one can survive without money and also they can still look for new opportunities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, look, may, moreover, really, so, still, then, at least, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44473684211 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55885161872 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484210526316 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 532.8 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9176979883 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3529411765 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3529411765 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318388919579 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114559573101 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682870621705 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205626974656 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553348963708 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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