Do you agree or disagree: People should relax with the ways related to their hobbies and physical
activities which are different with their work.
Today's modern society views working of its citizen as an cornerstone of human civilization.
With this in mind, people and HRs often debate whether workers should kick back and relax in
whatever way they prefer or they should relax within their work. Personally, I would prefer
different platform for relaxing for various reasons, two of which I shall touch upon in the
following paragraphs to prove my perspective.
To begin with, engaging in differnt activity for relaxing will guarentee a deep focus in
performing tasks. Nowadays, with this swift growth of jobs and increase the employment rates,
there is not much time to unwind. This would wrongly force employers to mix their tasks and
works, resulting a poorly coordinated behavior. This behavior damages the concentration and
focus of an individuals. For example, during the Covid-19 pandemic, we all have experinced
similar situation with our remote jobs. Huge burden of tasks would not give us a chance to
relieve from stress.Last week, I have read an article suggesting that remote workers should
seperate their work environment by physical barrier. This seperation between work environment
and other part of home will ensure that we use our rest time only for relaxing and not thinking
about works which can drastically increase our performance. Had it not been for this suggestion
by the author of that article, I would not have been able to concentrate and get my work done.
Another point worth mentioning is that, work-related deadlines can cause disstress and anxiety
attacks which can influence the productivity of workers. In this day and age, people are suffering
from various deadlines and it can cause them a lot of panic attacks. In this harsh medium, one
can not find relaxation and any attempt to perform, for example a meditation, would certainly
destined to fail. In this regard, one should seize the golden opportunity to engage in activity that
feels comfortable and natural to one's need. Although there are some argues that some may
actually love their jobs, but the amount of pressure and stress is to much to be neglected, even in
those environments. In this way, one would have the energy needed to perform well in one's job.
This would increase efficiency and productivity. Therefore, relieving from stress can maximize
worker's performance.
To conclude, having considered all points discussed perviously, I firmly believe that it is far
better to engage in different activity to chill out. This is because not only it increase worker's
productivity but it also prevents damaging to concentration.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: a
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'destine'
Suggestion: destine
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Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...ut the amount of pressure and stress is to much to be neglected, even in those en...
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Suggestion: one's
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Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 9.8082437276 224% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2220.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 420.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28571428571 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78624740523 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57619047619 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4815122552 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.714285714 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 29.0 4.53405017921 640% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228617600364 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598852412905 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620647848318 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0527512210167 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528098052312 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.