Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People should relax with the ways related to their hobbies and physical activities which are different with their work.
People select several hobbies and physical movements for relaxation. While some people detect their hobbies related to their work, others are not inclined to pick up the different ways with their work. It is so controversial for people to determine a specific conclusion. In my view, relaxing with the methods connected with their interests which are not similar to their job is the best way. They can easily forget their tedious work while focusing on the enjoyments, establish new people who are getting into same hobbies, and stand another side from their work to work efficiently.
First, devoting their time to different interests with their work diminishes the tiresome memories in their work. Most people work at an office from 9 am to 5 pm. The constant working time sometimes gives them depression and anxiety. Moreover, they are willing to spend their free time playing sports associated with their work. Consequently, their mind would be worse than ever. On the other hand, if they dive into pastimes interconnected with their jobs, they would relieve and rest their tired body and emotion as much as possible. They could have refreshed their mind. Therefore, people should be in favor of interests unrelated to their work.
Secondly, people can construct new friendships with others in the hobbies dissimilar to their work. Workmates often obtain the same personality and talk about limited topics. People strictly rely on a fair amount of members in their company to go out anywhere in their free time. Finally, they would feel bored. However, dedicating time to hobbies disconnected from their jobs boosts the number of friends acquiring different characteristics. They can enjoy their free time and comfort in depth of their mind. Thus, building up hobbies disconnected from work is a momentum way to relax.
Finally, hobbies that are not the same as work provide people with a new viewpoint. Generally speaking, people continue working with the same people. As a result, their mindset and thinking set the only way to improve productivity in an office. Nevertheless, playing sports and running around the house sometimes produces an opportunity to think up an alternative idea with other colleagues. People make use of the hobbies isolated to their work to brush up their attitude and mindset.
To sum up, people should not be curious about the hobbies connected with their work for moderation. I surely believe that they are capable of overlooking their studious work, making new communication with others, and cultivating new standpoints to enhance the quality of their work.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, as a result, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2185.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19002375297 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68906061525 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515439429929 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 652.5 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1385802457 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9259259259 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5925925926 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.37037037037 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.481747448282 0.236089414692 204% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161753055844 0.076458572812 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111210497934 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.336124474374 0.150856017488 223% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643028882134 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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