It is better to work as a team than as an individual to succeed

Essay topics:

It is better to work as a team than as an individual to succeed.

Submitted by shero on Thu, 09/10/2020 - 02:16

There is no doubt that working as a team can be more benefitial than working alone. When you have a team to work with, you can share ideas that help the team and the company grow. However, personally I prefer to work on my own, rather then work with other people together. I believe this is a good way for some reasons that I will elaborate in this essay.
To began with, working alone will help you better understend the meaning of the job you are doing. I think this way based on my own experience. So, when I started to work for a helthacare insurance, I had no idea what I was going to do. First week they let me sit with one of my coworkers and she was explaining me the job, but also she was doing lots of the things by herself, and I could not learn everything I needed. The second week I was on my own, and I started searching on the companie's webpage to understand more the job I supposed to do. I found some useful videos and iformations there and thus, I was able to work more precisly by myself. In other words, it helped me succeed more quickly when I was alone.
Secondly, working as an idividual you can get more credit from the company. When I do the job myself, all the gredits and the appretiations goes towards my name. It is so great because it helps me to get higher possition. So, if you work as a team you do not have this opportunity. When work together the company will not be able to find out who was the one who did the job better. Thi is only possible when you work as an individual.
Finally, there are also some places where you can get paid more or get bonuses for your performance. For example, my brother works at ''Chase Bank'' and he works as an individ. For this year he was getting bonuses for his work almost every month. Besides the regular paycheck, they were giving him bonuse about five hundered dollars every month when his performance was excellent. Also, they will give him a raise by the end of this year. This is one example why I think thoat working as an individ will help you be more appreciated and also get more paid.
To sum up, rather you work as a team or alone , it is highly recommended thay you respect your coworkers and everyone else arount you. You also have to be responsible for the work you are doing and give your best and be a good example for others.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 189, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the team and the company grow. However, personally I prefer to work on my own, ...
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Line 1, column 229, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... personally I prefer to work on my own, rather then work with other people toget...
^^
Line 1, column 238, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...lly I prefer to work on my own, rather then work with other people together. I beli...
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Line 2, column 297, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... me sit with one of my coworkers and she was explaining me the job, but also she ...
^^
Line 2, column 488, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
... my own, and I started searching on the companies webpage to understand more the job I s...
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Line 2, column 505, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arted searching on the companies webpage to understand more the job I supposed to...
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Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[4]
Message: “So , if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...se it helps me to get higher possition. So, if you work as a team you do not have this...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... team you do not have this opportunity. When work together the company will not be a...
^^^^
Line 3, column 437, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ossible when you work as an individual. Finally, there are also some places wher...
^^^
Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...m up, rather you work as a team or alone , it is highly recommended thay you respe...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, i suppose, i think, no doubt, in other words, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1873.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.21846846847 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31689643484 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475225225225 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 602.1 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8533045232 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.92 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.76 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216550511887 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719265382226 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710474863031 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136696715875 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645590068816 0.0645574589148 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 11.7677419355 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.9 10.9000537634 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 189, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the team and the company grow. However, personally I prefer to work on my own, ...
^^
Line 1, column 229, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... personally I prefer to work on my own, rather then work with other people toget...
^^
Line 1, column 238, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...lly I prefer to work on my own, rather then work with other people together. I beli...
^^^^
Line 2, column 297, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... me sit with one of my coworkers and she was explaining me the job, but also she ...
^^
Line 2, column 488, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
... my own, and I started searching on the companies webpage to understand more the job I s...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 505, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arted searching on the companies webpage to understand more the job I supposed to...
^^
Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[4]
Message: “So , if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...se it helps me to get higher possition. So, if you work as a team you do not have this...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... team you do not have this opportunity. When work together the company will not be a...
^^^^
Line 3, column 437, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ossible when you work as an individual. Finally, there are also some places wher...
^^^
Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...m up, rather you work as a team or alone , it is highly recommended thay you respe...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, i suppose, i think, no doubt, in other words, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1873.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.21846846847 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31689643484 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475225225225 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 602.1 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8533045232 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.92 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.76 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216550511887 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719265382226 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710474863031 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136696715875 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645590068816 0.0645574589148 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 11.7677419355 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.9 10.9000537634 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 189, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the team and the company grow. However, personally I prefer to work on my own, ...
^^
Line 1, column 229, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... personally I prefer to work on my own, rather then work with other people toget...
^^
Line 1, column 238, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...lly I prefer to work on my own, rather then work with other people together. I beli...
^^^^
Line 2, column 297, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... me sit with one of my coworkers and she was explaining me the job, but also she ...
^^
Line 2, column 488, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
... my own, and I started searching on the companies webpage to understand more the job I s...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 505, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arted searching on the companies webpage to understand more the job I supposed to...
^^
Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[4]
Message: “So , if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...se it helps me to get higher possition. So, if you work as a team you do not have this...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... team you do not have this opportunity. When work together the company will not be a...
^^^^
Line 3, column 437, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ossible when you work as an individual. Finally, there are also some places wher...
^^^
Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...m up, rather you work as a team or alone , it is highly recommended thay you respe...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, i suppose, i think, no doubt, in other words, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1873.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.21846846847 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31689643484 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475225225225 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 602.1 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8533045232 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.92 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.76 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216550511887 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719265382226 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710474863031 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136696715875 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645590068816 0.0645574589148 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 11.7677419355 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.9 10.9000537634 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.