It is commonly believed that in life, success is not the most important thing; it is more important to remain happy and optimistic when we fail. Do you agree with that idea?
Being successful is one of the most controversial issues in human life which has a big impact on different aspects of life. Some people prefer to be number one in their life and they spent a lot of energy and time to obtain it, whereas other people are generally inclined to the idea that being happy and optimistic is more essential for having an efficient life. Although it is hard to reach a consensus on this issue, I, myself, do believe that being happy and optimistic when we fail is the best way that we can choose to make delightful life. because, it makes life exciting, teaches us to compensate for our failures, and gives us to spend energy on our hobbies and self-satisfaction.
One of the compelling reasons that justifies my thesis is that being always successful and trying to reach this goal makes our life tedious and monotonous. Life repletes with ups and downs like a cardiograph curve, showing someone is still alive. It is clear that we need these fluctuations in our life to avoid a boring life, especially in this hectic modern life. We need to be happy and enjoy these ups and downs and decorate our canvas with this life dancing.
Moreover, sometimes failure is a base for future successes. Indeed, failure is like a course that teaches us how to be successful next time. Therefore, we must be happy and optimistic in such circumstances which are two master keys in order to learn new things to find and solve the problems to get the next successes. For instance, the Japan football team had a big failure in the World cup in 1998, but they used an optimistic way to compensate for their failure. Finally, they get the best record ever in the World cup 2002. They knew that failure is not the end and also found that being calm in critical situations and just learning can help them in the next steps.
Last but not least, if we always focus on one goal which is being successful, we would need a lot of energy and after a while, we found that we are exhausted and drained. The first consequence of this issue is sensible satisfaction reduction and life quality reduction. For instance, we lost our friends and family, essential keys that we can spend time with them. As a result, we have to find an optimum point to keep these assets in our life, because when we fail they will beside us in critical situations.
In conclusion, although people hold different attitudes, I support the opinion that being happy and optimistic is a rational act when we fail. This decision helps us to learn new ways to conquer problems and use them in future life. In addition, it makes our life more exciting with our friends and family and gives us more self-satisfaction.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 548, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
... we can choose to make delightful life. because, it makes life exciting, teaches us to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, whereas, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2219.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 479.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63256784969 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61032140434 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463465553236 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 688.5 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2463805781 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.666666667 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8095238095 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246647381229 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787703053459 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597909561449 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152775946627 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552635905169 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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