Without a shadow of a doubt, life is fraught with ups and downs, and we face a plethora of obstacles through our lives. While some people believe that all that matters is the success of our actions, others, however, stand at the other side of the continuum, asserting that the result of our action is less important. As for my opinion, I subscribe to the latter idea and I vehemently cling to the notion that we should be happy about ourselves, even if we fail. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into two of my most prominent reasons for advocating this viewpoint.
First and foremost, we can't achieve success without failure. Through these failures we obtain the precious treasury of experience, which, in turn, opens the door to countless providential and permanent chances to reap benefits from. Tackling obstacles will lead to accumulating invaluable experiences helping us in the future. Failure paves the way for success. Therefore, we should be happy when we fail, because this means that we're getting closer to our final goal. A personal example can drive this notion home. When I was in university studying for my Bachelor's degree, I used to work on robotic arms. Through this process I failed many times, but each time I learned from my mistakes and managed to gain a profound comprehension of robotics. As a result, now I'm working in the biggest robotic company in my country, and I wouldn't achieve this level of success without my failures. Dealing with arduous challenges planted the seed of perseverance in me. My failures motivated me to study more and try to indicate the cause of my failures.
Furthermore, another equally compelling reason for corroborating my stance lies in the fact that there is no benefit in being pessimist. There is no denying that our life is fulfilled with unavoidable problems to overcome. By being pessimist, we will just make things harder to ourselves. Being optimistic has deleterious repercussion on our life, and in the long run it will cause serious mental illnesses. After all, we have to overcome these adversities. Therefore, we can make things easier by being optimistic about our situation and try to approach our difficulties with enthusiasm and diligence. In fact, a research study conducted recently, indicate that people who are optimistic, are less likely to be diagnosed with stress and anxiety.
To put it all in a nutshell, having all the aforementioned reasons and examples into account, I strongly believe that we should be happy about our failing, on the ground that it prepares us for success, also being pessimist would just make thing harder than it is.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, after all, as for, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2199.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 442.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97511312217 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8106951393 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561085972851 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 683.1 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.97527404 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6086956522 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2173913043 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82608695652 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21281011244 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06032801821 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039637426738 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130888639845 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274483120655 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 86.8835125448 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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