Is it easier for a person today to become an educated person than in the past?
Education is the most important topic in modern days as well as in the past. Everybody need to become an educated person in order to have a better success in their future career. Some people may ask, is it easier for a person today to become an educated person than in the past? In my opinion, it is easier.
To begin with, it is easier for a person today to become an educated person than in the past because there are varies kinds of resources for modern people to learn about. To be more specific, the best explanation is technologies. In modern days, technologies are an extremely important method for people to learn. It is not only very convenient but also require different websites and app for people to use. Take me as an example, I am always very interest in math, so I want to learn more than what my teacher teach me. As a result, I like to use a website call Khan Academy, which is a website that include many knowledges about mathematics. Therefore, even though I am still a high school students, but I am already start learning about the math problems people are teaching in university. Moreover, there are lots of pictures or videos for students to look at, which is a effective way for students to do when they are studying about geography or astronomy, because they can actually some landscapes in the geography class or planets and galaxy in the astronomy class. Thus, there are many resources for modern people to use in order to become an educated person. On the other hand, people in the past can only study with traditional textbooks. It can be very boring and lead to the result that they do not have any passion in studying. Also, when they have any questions, it can be hard for them to figure out since they cannot search online. To say it differently, there are many different resources for modern people to use, so it is far more easier for people to become well educated nowadays than in the past.
In addition, since there are more competitions in modern time, being an educated person is the key point to success. To be more specific, there is no doubt that people will have more opportunity to find a suitable job when they are well educated. However, since the competition between people who are trying to find a job had increase, the company will set up some more strict requirements. For instance, some company may want people to require different language skills or some knowledge in some specific field, so people will definitely become well educated when they are learning these skills. Indeed, since there are less competitions between people and lower requirement for them to find a job, it is obvious that it is easier for modern people to become an educated person than in the past.
Undoubtedly, some people may say that it is easier to become educated in the past, because since there is no technologies, people will not be distracted by videos or games online. However, I think that even though people in the past cannot play games online, there are still some other traditional games that can distract them. Moreover, the advantages on technologies are far more than the drawbacks. Thus, it is a lot more easier for a person to become educated nowadays than in ancient times.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 874, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ideos for students to look at, which is a effective way for students to do when t...
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Line 2, column 1481, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...nline. To say it differently, there are many different resources for modern people to use, so ...
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Line 2, column 1545, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
... for modern people to use, so it is far more easier for people to become well educated nowa...
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Line 3, column 621, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun competitions is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...g these skills. Indeed, since there are less competitions between people and lower r...
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Line 4, column 98, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are no technologies'?
Suggestion: there are no technologies
...ome educated in the past, because since there is no technologies, people will not be distracted by video...
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Line 4, column 420, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...e than the drawbacks. Thus, it is a lot more easier for a person to become educated nowaday...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for instance, i think, in addition, no doubt, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 36.0 15.1003584229 238% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 82.0 52.1666666667 157% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2657.0 1977.66487455 134% => OK
No of words: 571.0 407.700716846 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65323992995 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88831323574 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5523181527 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.401050788091 0.524837075471 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 878.4 618.680645161 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8493448818 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.192307692 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9615384615 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.96153846154 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.442789973566 0.236089414692 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161651527528 0.076458572812 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.202404514262 0.0737576698707 274% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.375708229127 0.150856017488 249% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.162810694815 0.0645574589148 252% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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