It is generally agreed that society benefits from the work of its members. Compare the contributions of artists to society with the contributions of scientists to society. Which type of contribution do you think is valued more by society? Give specific reasons to support your answer.
A society is a place which environmentally limited by different people who are talented and skilled in various majors such as sports, industry, science, art, etc. Every member of the society has an impact on it. Actually, it is a interaction between society and its members. Some of them are destructive, in contrast, some of them have a valuable role. Since the prompt asked to discuss about contributions of artist and scientists, which are valuable to society, the following paragraphs present my perspectives about artists and scientist's role in society.
Let's get start with scientists. All of us believe that science is the key of development of a society. Science is equal to wealth, prosperity and wisdom. When we read historical trends in development of societies, we come up with an idea that science ignited the oven of development. So, as science should be gain, discover, create, or by any other suitable word, scientists have very critical and inevitable role in contribution of the society. Scientist are people who eager find novel solutions to solve our society's or world's problems. Without scientists, we may kill through illness, accident, nutrition deficiency and so far. Scientists are people whose bring money to our society whereby companies sells the technologies that they invented. So, without scientists, we will have inactive society that others dominant us.Without science, we would be live like our ancients in the cave.
In the other hand, artists are valuable to society too. They provide services and products that improve society's aesthetic perception. Artists has very important role in society's psychological health by entertaining them and trigger them think about issues in the other ways. So, without artists we will live in a society that has psychological problems. Furthermore, arts and artists are our societies identity, therefore, we should try to maintain them in an appropriate manner.
Personally, I believe that scientist are more prominent in society's contribution. Nowadays, scientists are very effective in in socio-economic development of society. Indeed, we can't live without devices, inventions and discoveries of scientists, but artists do not have such impact in our life. Furthermore, artists are using science and knowledge, which are created by scientists, in their performances.
To sum up, although I think that all of the majors and people are necessary in existence of a society, some of them are like blood in our body. I mean science is like blood in society. With respect to artists, but no one could continue to live without science and scientists, but it does not valid about art and artists.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, i mean, i think, in contrast, such as, to sum up, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2248.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27699530516 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00843004336 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 694.8 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8425630314 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4615384615 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3846153846 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263902797531 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790342928151 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573583811017 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155976190992 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672026237003 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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