It has been said, "Not everything that is learned is contained in books." Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?
I strongly agree with this sentence that everything can not be learned from books. I believe that most of the important lessons we take from experience hence any activities either it is bad one or nice which gives life learning lessons are the best teacher.
To begin with, thought management and balancing the emotions are skills you need it for socialization, interaction and also for your happy life. In my opinion, No one can learn it by books. For example, a 15-16 years boy name "Raghu" lives very near to my house. He is a very intelligent and determined student as far as I know. I always found him studying, when I got a chance to visit his house. This year, on an annual exam, he got a little bad score in chemistry subject. Somehow, I came to know that last Sunday, he got hospitalized because of the overthinking. The doctor said that due to high stress his blood pressure raised to a dangerous level. He could not manage his emotions and thoughts when he got bad marks. Therefore here I want to convey that to managing emotions is a very important skill to be successful in future and it can not be learned from the book. If it was the case Raghu was very bookish boy.
Furthermore, there are many more things, you learn by your daily life experience and not from book. Books only give you practical knowledge but experience and activities give you real knowledge. For example, I always read in book that " people are known by there thought and not by dress" but somehow I always judge people. For instance, on Diwali fest, went to my aunt's house and I came to know one of a woman wearing very simple and a little dirty sari. I thought she must be a servant in my aunt's house. I asked her to bring a glass of water for me and she brought for me. Suddenly, my aunts told me very proudly that meet with my friend she is the first women indian police officer in our district. I felt so ashamed on my thought and I learn the lesson that one should not judge anyone by his physical appearance. Now, this learning was life long and it was learning in real sense.
In conclusion. I definitely think that Books can not teach you every skill similarly books are not the best source of learning. Experience is the best teacher.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, similarly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4927184466 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56006181293 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516990291262 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1067053074 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.125 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14412732137 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411388379817 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594840218299 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100323668547 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066404759896 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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