It has recently been announced that a large shopping center may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer
There are a plethora of structures, such as shopping malls, that have a profound effect on the people in neighborhood. Some people obviously prevent to building these facilities. As far as I am concerned, if there is a tremendous shopping center built near my home, I strongly support its construction. This is because a mall supports individuals with home appliances and provides occupations to unemployed people. This essay will provide further aspects and examples to support this notion in the subsequent paragraphs.
First and foremost, a mega mall allows individuals to be comfortable to consume food and necessary equipment. There are plenty of essential things in daily life, such as food, clothes, and housewares, gathering to facilitate all people. Moreover, these days, people go to a shopping center to other purposes, such as booking a concert ticket or conducting a personal banking. To illustrate this, my mother usually go to the Central, a mega department store in Thailand, for many purposes. She not only goes shopping tools and food, but she also conducts the majority of financial transactions in the bank in this mall. Furthermore, when my mother is free from her business, she often spends her free-time to go shopping some new collection of cosmetics, or eats her favorite dishes and dessert.
Secondly, another fact that supports my standpoint is that a department store would employ a plethora of people from the community. In a shopping center, there are various positions that require a large number of unemployed people. Therefore, many individuals will have a revenue and be capable of treating themselves and their family. Moreover, individuals in the neighborhood will be wealthy enough to be able to afford to send their children to a school. For instance, before the mall was built near my home, there are a number of jobless persons, and they cannot afford their children's tuition fees. Therefore, many adolescents desire to work in free-time after school. After the mega mall was opened, many families have income, and their kids have a better opportunities to study.
In conclusion, I firmly support the construction of department stores near the neighborhood. This is due to the fact that a shopping center provides necessary tools and food for people in the society, and it will employ and provide revenue to many unemployed people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 196, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...here are various positions that require a large number of unemployed people. Therefore, many indi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1998.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18961038961 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94007617251 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501298701299 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.670336102 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.9 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158310669089 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521893694744 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425378834066 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111338113411 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451925622306 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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