Many people believe that it is very important to make large amount of money, while others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living. Analyze each viewpoint and take a stand. Give specific reasons for your position.
In the modern days, money is, inevitably, necessary for human’s life. People use money to buy goods and services to satisfy themselves. However, some people argue that making money is considerable, while other people think earning a comfortable living is better. I personally agree that people should make huge amount of money, and I will provide further aspects and examples to support this notion.
First and foremost, people can use money to buy good educations. Most people realize that educations are necessary to broaden their knowledge horizon, but most professional institutes of education require the amount of tuition fee. I can attest this from my own experience, my brother, who was a basketball player in high school team, wanted to enroll into the best university in United States because there is the best basketball club with cutting-edge technology. Therefore, he left from the old school and apply to the new better one, and it uses large amount of money to pay not only tuition fee but also the cost of living.
Secondly, it is true that money helps people in unexpected situations. It is unfortunate for human that usually have an unpredictable ailments and accidents. Therefore, it is necessary to prepare themselves for those acute diseases. To illustrate this, my uncle, who was a taxi driver, was broken his armed by car-crashed accident. In this case, he was required for surgery and had to stay in the hospital for a week. Afterwards, there were many expensive charge from all services that he needed to pay. Fortunately, because of his family's preparation, he had enough money to pay this unexpected fee. Therefore, people should carefully manage their money and always have enough amount of money in order to allot something that will unpredictably happen.
In conclusion, I totally believe that making large amount of money is necessary. This is due to the fact that people should keep enough money not only for their tuition fee but also in case that people need to pay hospital fee from their severe accident.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0796460177 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74198271499 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536873156342 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6666666667 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222278157922 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791756689038 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643028705325 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15332240185 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661594890206 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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