It has recently been announced that a large shopping center may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Nowadays, the great idea is making money or try to build micro business or it is the best if we can start a macro business. But, I like to start from micro business. So, I believe that if they built a large shopping center near my home or my shop, I strongly support that idea and I know this idea has some disadvantages like, traffic jam, enormous population and big noise. On the other hand, it is helpful for my people who are living next to me some of them are still jobless and it is really bad jobless cause of many crimes like, bank robbery, car stilling and even murderer. However, I support this idea if they built a shopping center near my home or my shop and I have my reasons like creating jobs, help other professions and it is helpful for economics.
First, if government or a private sector try to build a new shopping center near my house or shop, I will support that I know this idea has some problem. But, the advantage is more than that disadvantages. For instance, when they build new shopping center near our home or shop it is a good chance for our jobless friends they can find new professions as seller or even as managers. So, they can make big money and support their family and they love this idea and they should support that and help them to build more centers near their homes. However, I support this ideas that they build shopping center or another kinds of centers near our homes or shops and I love this idea.
Second, when our friends or our people have jobs, it is very satisfactory news. Because, they leave crime and they search for new life with better conditions I love to hear this news alleviate crime and safety live. So, when they build new place for business or making shopping center near our homes or shops, it is very helpful for our economics. We can use this chance to create more chances like build new roads, bring new technologies and make a powerful relation with new commerce and new people I like to build new shopping center near my home or my shop.
To sum up, we have a proverb in our country that says “new place new people” It means when they create or build new centers or shopping centers near our homes or shops we can make more money and more money mean better live. So, when government or private sectors make shopping center near our neighborhood have some advantages and disadvantages. But, now I prefer to discuss about advantages like creating jobs and help to boost economics. However, I like and I support this idea that they build a shopping center near my neighborhood.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, really, second, so, still, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 37.0 13.8261648746 268% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 82.0 43.0788530466 190% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2092.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 467.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47965738758 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37676755748 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.368308351178 0.524837075471 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 643.5 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.1938962897 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.222222222 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9444444444 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148331975061 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681811746872 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671535248882 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113590565411 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360370901377 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.53 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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