Do you agree or disagree with statement (TV has destroyed communication among friends and family.)?
My father is a sociologist and he always talk about relationships between communities. On the other hand, TV has some advantages and disadvantages. Our people have a proverb that say” all coins have two different side”. So, TV has some advantages like, support to know different culture it is helpful for my people. They can solve their problem and talk about that and know new methods. However, make strong relation among friends and family.so, they can use TV as a template of good relation. So, I must say I am disagree with statement that says” TV has destroy communication among friends and family.
First of all, as I mentioned my father is a sociologist he believes that TV is helpful for societies. Help them to know different cultures or people can use TV as source of knowledge in different fields like, agriculture, economics, law … for instance, I start learning basic math from a local TV and now I try to help other students in my village.so, I encourage my family and friends to use TV as a source of knowledge. It is a strong way of communication with other parts of the world. On the other hand, my friend well have a strong relation with other communities and also understand their cultures and use their knowledge it is the new method of learning from TV.
Second, I find an article it is about sociology. So, the author explain that TV makes powerful the relation among friends and families. On the other hand, author advised that TV is a cause for discussion or talking or joyful time among friends and families TV force them to talk about different subjects. For example: when people watch an entertainment program on TV like serials, prank or a specific program? After that, they can discuss about different results or spend joyful time togather.so, we can call this good relation among friends and families. However, I have the same idea and I believes that TV is very helpful for my society especially among my friends and my family.
Next, many sociologist believes that TV is acting as solver and connector among families and friends. I want to explain a short story about my life. So, I was isolate I suffered from this sickness. After few months my father helps me to find myself he encourage me for watching TV programs especially psychology programs that was on going by professional Doctors. However, now I am completely healthful. So, I have good relation with my family and friends. I also encourage other students or people to use TV it helps them for good communication among friends and their families.
To sum up, my father as sociologist always believes that TV is very helpful for students or people. So, I have the same idea that TV is like a connector between people and realities. As I mentioned, I was isolate person I suffered this sickness I could not have relation with my family and my friends. But, TV help me to find myself and have good relation among friends and my family. Many psychologist also have the same idea about TV and good effect on people. However, I strongly believe that TV has not destroy the communication among friends and family. Or I am disagree with statement that says” TV has destroy the communication among friends and family”
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, well, for example, for instance, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 34.0 13.8261648746 246% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 80.0 43.0788530466 186% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2675.0 1977.66487455 135% => OK
No of words: 560.0 407.700716846 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77678571429 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.8645985582 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81591629249 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.357142857143 0.524837075471 68% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 820.8 618.680645161 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1798433019 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2903225806 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.064516129 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8064516129 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289546182959 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102818163131 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123151075873 0.0737576698707 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207711655934 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802009003256 0.0645574589148 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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