When people success, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success. Do you agree or disagree?
Greek famous philosopher says that “hard working, success and luck these are like a cycles that always in rotation”. However, hardworking is necessary to be a successful person in your life. On the other hand, luck is important some people do their duties by luck they are really lucky persons and they can do everything and at the end they are successful. On the other hand, I believe when people are success that they do hardworking. Hardworking make us powerful persons in future. So, persons with hardworking they can have a bright future and they well become important persons.
First of all, when we discus about success. So, we should express some reasons. All famous leaders, managers, philosophers, they do hardworking at the beginning of their life. For instance, I want explain my studying life. At the first, I started my studying at the school and after 12 years that is finished. However, after school I stared my education at Economics University besides my studying I searched for a part time job. So, I find a job at a private organization as admin assistant and they paid me 100 $ per month. However, I must say that success without hardworking is nothing. So, I believe that people are successful, because they working hard.
Second, luck is important. But, without hardworking it is nothing and worthless or we cannot find that serious. In Persian language people have a proverb that say “witch is bring by wind, which well go with wind”. However, many grate people from different countries they believe that for a bright and big future people must hardworking in every parts of life. For instance, students if they like to be good managers or Economist they should studying hard and using from different sources like internet, books and universities professors. Without hard working they cannot have bright future and they should do sample jobs in restaurants or motels. However, I have an advice for all students or people if you want success you must working hard. I believe for hard working.
Next, when people do hardworking. In fact, they are powerful persons. So, they well become important persons in their life in future. Once they well shiny as sun and can face with big problem and solve that easy. On the other hand, people how do their jobs by luck I believe they are not powerful persons and they cannot face with challenges of life they well brook against that. However, I strongly believe that people well achieve success with hardworking not with luck. So, hardworking is the best for success.
To sum up, many philosophers from different countries they believe that hardworking is helpful for all people, because they can have bright future, people with hardworking are powerful against the challenge of life and they well be important persons in future life. However, I strongly advice all people especially students be hard work persons. It is helpful and increase your strength and make you ready for future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a cycle' or simply 'cycles'?
Suggestion: a cycle; cycles
...orking, success and luck these are like a cycles that always in rotation'. However,...
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Line 1, column 484, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...g. Hardworking make us powerful persons in future. So, persons with hardworking they can ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... they well become important persons. First of all, when we discus about succe...
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Line 3, column 418, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ty besides my studying I searched for a part time job. So, I find a job at a private orga...
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Line 3, column 512, Rule ID: CURRENCY[2]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$100'.
Suggestion: $100
...ion as admin assistant and they paid me 100 $ per month. However, I must say that suc...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ccessful, because they working hard. Second, luck is important. But, without ...
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Line 5, column 677, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'advice'.
Suggestion: advice
... restaurants or motels. However, I have an advice for all students or people if you want ...
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Line 7, column 124, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... become important persons in their life in future. Once they well shiny as sun and can fa...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rength and make you ready for future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, really, second, so, well, for instance, in fact, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2487.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 498.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99397590361 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72397222731 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6681633959 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.401606425703 0.524837075471 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 740.7 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.6003584229 160% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.5968962851 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3636363636 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0909090909 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78787878788 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 25.0 11.8709677419 211% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272183347772 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890868035885 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860173543233 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181475132107 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556755502107 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.