We all work or will work in our jobs with many different kinds of people. In your opinion, what are some important characteristics of a co-worker (someone you work closely with)? Use reasons and specific examples to explain why these characteristics are i

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We all work or will work in our jobs with many different kinds of people. In your opinion, what are some important characteristics of a co-worker (someone you work closely with)? Use reasons and specific examples to explain why these characteristics are important.

The best characters for my co-worker or colleague I believe patient, behaviors, teamwork, management (time management), and the most important character is respect. However, I think if my co-worker or my colleague does show respect for other colleagues or for people, I think he is just impolite and not well for an office. So, I like working in an office with good colleagues that they have good behaviors and show respect for all people I really love that place and it is my best wish to find such office to continue my profession or continue my job with those kinds of people I like that.
First, if we like to working in an office with good co-workers or colleagues at the first steep, we should know how to behavior with other coworker. So, I think it is nice if we start form ourselves. For instance, I am working in a big organization and I have a large number of colleagues or coworkers they are really cleaver and always guide me to the right way because I am new comer on their and they behave me like younger brother and solve my problem. However, I love this organization and especially my colleagues they have the best behavior with me. So, I believe the important character for my colleague is behavior. I really I love this idea good behavior with coworker or colleagues.
Second, I discuss with my colleagues everyday about the important characters of co-worker. However, more than 90% of my colleagues have the same ideas they believe all colleagues should have strong team work. For instance, we are working in short term project and we should finish that for months. However, we are feel comfortable. Due to, we are good team. In fact, we have enough knowledge about project and the most important we have strong teamwork. So, executive director know this matter that we have good teamwork with good knowledge. Moreover, we have brilliant experience in projects. However, I love teamwork and I believe it is the good method to accomplish our duties as well as possible I like this idea.
Third, most of managers believe that colleagues or co-workers should know about the management or at least about time management. In fact, as a character and I think it is good idea that all colleagues know about management or time management and if they don’t have enough information about management it is a problem for organization, it is a negative point for them. Due to, they cannot complete their duties on time. Moreover, they should believe for patient with this phenomenon they cannot continue. However, I love this ideas that our colleagues or co-workers should know about management and time management and beside that they know to be patient. So, I enjoy this kinds of co-workers.
Conclusion, I think most of directors or managers they have the same ideas about characters of colleagues or co-workers. So, they believe that good colleagues should know how to respect for people or another co-workers. On the other hand, colleagues should know about time management or management. Moreover, good behavior with colleagues. However, I love such environment and I believe all co-worker like this ideas like, respect, patient, behavior, management or time management it is brilliant ideas.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ith those kinds of people I like that. First, if we like to working in an offic...
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...orking in a big organization and I have a large number of colleagues or coworkers they are really...
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... guide me to the right way because I am new comer on their and they behave me like younge...
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...aracter for my colleague is behavior. I really I love this idea good behavior with cowor...
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... behavior with coworker or colleagues. Second, I discuss with my colleagues eve...
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... as well as possible I like this idea. Third, most of managers believe that col...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, really, second, so, third, well, at least, for instance, i think, in fact, in short, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 33.0 13.8261648746 239% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 94.0 43.0788530466 218% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2672.0 1977.66487455 135% => OK
No of words: 545.0 407.700716846 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90275229358 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83169070408 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80603795459 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.343119266055 0.524837075471 65% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 834.3 618.680645161 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 24.0 9.59856630824 250% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3727999358 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1379310345 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7931034483 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.96551724138 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140733806442 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538663552719 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041321640657 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100649808827 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394932306855 0.0645574589148 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.002688172 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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