It has recently been announced that a new hıgh school may be buılt ın your communıty. Do you support or oppose thıs paln why
Having schools near to where you live could be like a treasure for many people who are still learning or working in education, but the situation might be different for ones who are not educated or even not loving crowed places since having a high school in someone’s community definitely would make the community a bit crowded and much nosier. Personally, it is my dream to have a high school around my house since it can ease my life, can make my community a lot safer, and also can affect our lifestyle as whole.
It cannot be gainsaid that having a high school near our homes can make our life easier especially for high school students since they can go to it without needing any kind of transportation and also the time to go and back to their homes would be shorter so they would have more time to focus on their study and spend their time in studying or even relaxing. My experience could support what I have mentioned since my high school was so near to my flat and I regard myself a fortunate person because the time for arriving my school was just ten minutes. That affected my mood and energy for studying since I was more comfortable whenever I came to my class and I never missed any classes due to any kind of traffic congestions.
What is more, building high schools in a community can absolutely affect the safeness of our area since the community would always be crowded even that crowded might be as a drawback for many people, but we should look at the positive side of this crowded community in terms of having many people around, many shops, cars, and even traffic. These factors make our area much safer and no one would be worried about their possessions and also their kids who are going to their schools alone. Imagine that a community with more people and a community without, which one would be safer?
To end it up, anything in our life has its pros and cons and we should consider which one has more significance impacts. I believe that the advantages of having a high school around our homes outweigh any drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, still, kind of, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52688172043 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42577404081 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467741935484 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.1344086022 184% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.292023611 48.9658058833 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.4 100.406767564 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.2 20.6045352989 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.075907712951 0.236089414692 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356358354833 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0237265267718 0.0737576698707 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0505025693797 0.150856017488 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172598044852 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 11.7677419355 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 58.1214874552 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.1575268817 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.59 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.0537634409 167% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.247311828 166% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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