It has recently been announced that a new high school may be built in your community. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details in your answer.
When it comes to the issue the building a new high school in a city, some people agree with this idea, because it have several advantages for them. However, others have the opposite view. As far as I am concerned, the former point carries more weight. I take this position on account for the following reasons.
First and the most important reason is that building a new high school in our neighborhood is beneficial for both student and parent. Having a high school near our community eliminate the hustle of waking up early morning to go to school without stuck in traffic. In addition, family can save more money, because they do not spend money for commute between school and home. Moreover, the school can put many facilities at local people’s disposal like sports facilities and auditorium. Regional people can use the auditorium of the high school for holding their ceremonies like wedding ceremony. Students can take part to extracurricular and stay for long time to use the sport facilities. I think that a small example can give some light on this matter. When I was a child, I was living in a small town, where did not exist any sport facilities. However, the high school allowed students to have access the soccer filed after school time.
A further point we must consider is that building a high school attracts more people to live here, which helps local businesses to expand their works and hire more employees. Moreover, the high school surely needs more people as managers, staffs, or teachers. Hence, people, especially juveniles can fill form and participate on hiring process. I think that there is not a better example than myself when I graduated from the university in math major. At that time, I started the job searching process in my town, which was small, so it was an impossible mission. There was not man various business and near ninety percent of people work on farm land, while I did not any proficiency unless teaching mathematics. Eventually, I succeed to work in a high school, which was established by local government recently, as a geometric teacher. The biggest advantage of the building a new high school lies in the fact that ameliorate the unemployment issue.
Admittedly, increasing the population can have some disadvantages such as traffic problems, which is common in big cities. I admit that it is entirely possible we face with this predicament, while the local government could solve this by improving infrastructures such as road and parking properly.
All above evidence supports this fact that building a new high school not only beneficial to students and parents, but also increase more job opportunities. Admittedly, as an English proverb goes “a coin has two sides”; therefore, those who take the opposite view are partly reasonable that this plan can increase traffic in our neighborhood. Nevertheless, I strongly believe that its benefits outweigh dangerous.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...people agree with this idea, because it have several advantages for them. However, o...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'i think', 'in addition', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.236462093863 0.229887763892 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.151624548736 0.158761421928 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0992779783394 0.0866891130778 115% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0523465703971 0.046263068375 113% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0505415162455 0.0685040099705 74% => OK
Prepositions: 0.110108303249 0.118717715034 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0324909747292 0.0351676179071 92% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.80067683152 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0180505415162 0.0309702414327 58% => OK
Particles: 0.00180505415162 0.00188951952338 96% => OK
Determiners: 0.101083032491 0.0887237588012 114% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0180505415162 0.0209618222197 86% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0180505415162 0.0139019557991 130% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2943.0 2387.08602151 123% => OK
No of words: 487.0 408.028673835 119% => OK
Chars per words: 6.0431211499 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69766713281 4.48200974243 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.359342915811 0.338922669872 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.268993839836 0.251872472559 107% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.195071868583 0.174417080927 112% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.125256673511 0.112833075102 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80067683152 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546201232033 0.524397521467 104% => OK
Word variations: 66.3672368268 59.2087087015 112% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6684587814 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.7307692308 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9734413574 48.84282405 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.192307692 120.699889404 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7307692308 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 45.6301532143 45.7405998639 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.48936170213 1.45489161554 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209572737183 0.300154397459 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0735864296988 0.103427244359 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0527125389828 0.0752933317313 70% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.437906613981 0.497263757937 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.129804869354 0.151897553556 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698215760694 0.114077575197 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405419821116 0.0781384742642 52% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.28964230473 0.336927656856 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.12321018662 0.067059652881 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133953488378 0.210909579961 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030852743784 0.0618886996521 50% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.91756272401 183% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.