It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why?
Culture and art are two important aspects that every government should pay attention to them. Since, they define a local area, a city or even a country to other people. It helps them get familiar with culture of that place. So, if it comes to building a new movie theater, I confidently believe that building a movie theater can be so much productive and beneficial for people who are living far from city centers where most theaters located.
First, in these fast and busy days of life that most families and specially parents spend most of their time in their workplace inevitably, there were a little time for fun and such things. So, distance is a crucial issue for placing these kinds of buildings. For example, a family can attend a theater easily after their day time career if a theater exists in their neighborhood.
Also, with growth of population and development of cities, expenses and prices of everything increase accordingly. It would be difficult for most of people to afford to spend money in such activities. Since the middle class families chiefly shape the main portion of theaters’ capacity.
Last but not least, planning to go to theaters in suburbs is much easier due to their less demand. Because if you want to attend a theater downtown in a specific day may be you have not the possibility to book a reservation due to large amount of applications. However, neighborhood theaters are not such like that.
In conclusion, theaters are one of the most important facilities which must be provided for the people who live in city neighborhoods and suburbs.it assist them with their timing and schedule strongly.
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- TOEFL T P O 23 - Integrated Writing Task 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
... accordingly. It would be difficult for most of people to afford to spend money in such activi...
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Line 5, column 293, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ain portion of theaters' capacity. Last but not least, planning to go to th...
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Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s much easier due to their less demand. Because if you want to attend a theater downtow...
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Line 7, column 167, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: maybe
...nd a theater downtown in a specific day may be you have not the possibility to book a ...
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Line 9, column 150, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'assists'?
Suggestion: assists
...ve in city neighborhoods and suburbs.it assist them with their timing and schedule str...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, however, if, may, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 279.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92114695341 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7502135681 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594982078853 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8831982114 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0714285714 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160111178163 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519256555759 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549804218643 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091648018775 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545117043847 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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