The new announcement that a new restaurant is going to be constructed in my neighbourhood rises people's attention. Due to possible noise all day round made by this restaurant and its customers, in many people's opinion, it is not an advisable proposal. Contrary to their viewpoints is my perspective that the new restaurant can benefit people considerably, due to its contributions to providing convenience of having meals and making frequent social interaction more possible.
Among all the benefits of building a new restaurant in our neighbourhood is the convenience provided for people who are too busy to cook for themselves. Citizens nowadays are leading a hustling and bustling lifestyle, and therefore restaurants with high walkability gain growing popularity among these citizens. Undoubtedly, the newly built restaurant in our neighbourhood can not only deprive people living in the surroundings of the hassle of preparing meals, but also help them save a huge amount of time. For example, even though my parents are extremely busy, they have to cook every day for three meals on account of the lack of restaurants surrounded our neighbourhood. I always hear from their complaints about that cooking is quite time-consuming as well as their hope for an accessible restaurant. Hence, I believe that the newly established restaurant is beneficial for my parents, since it can save quantities of their time and distract them from routine cooking.
Another primary benefit of the newly built restaurant revolves around the fact that it makes it easier for people living in the surroundings to have more social interaction with each other. It is an undisputed fact that never can two individuals maintain connected with merely occasional communication. To some extent, restaurants can function as a kind of social and vibrant platform, where residents can encounter and converse with diverse people. With constant and continuous interaction in the canteen, there is no doubt that some of them can form and keep a steady relationship and eventually become good friends. Take my friend's grandpa, once a lonely elderly, as an instance. He always has his breakfast in a local canteen and beside him, several other local people consume food there as well. With time going, the grandpa got acquainted with some of the latter and formed a firm friendship with them. As a result, the grandpa never feels lonely any more. Therefore, I believe the restaurant in our neighbourhood could serve in the same way as the canteen the grandpa often goes to. In other words, the canteen can enhance interaction and keep people away from being lonely and frustrated.
In a sum, I support to build a new restaurant in our neighbourhood in that it makes it more convenient for people to live and works as an interaction platform.
- People spend too much time on personal enjoyment - doing things they like to do - rather than doing things they should do.Do you agree or disagree with the above statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answers. 80
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: All university students should take basic science courses regardless of their field of study. 90
- It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 73
- Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are. 71
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: All university students should take basic science courses regardless of their field of study. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 206, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'inhabitants'' or 'inhabitant's'?
Suggestion: inhabitants'; inhabitant's
...s restaurant and its customers, in many inhabitants opinion, it is not an advisable proposa...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, therefore, well, for example, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23333333333 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10089592788 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552777777778 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7953680641 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.75 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0986575717812 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388212441823 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383424507087 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.077587292597 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331551326823 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Although our neighborhood is quite large and has a population of about a 2,000 people, it barely has any restaurants or other sources of entertainment. I do feel that a new restaurant should be built in my neighborhood for two reasons.
To begin with, my neighborhood only has about three to four restaurants that are located in very isolated areas and are considered quite unsafe. For example, I was once going over to my friend's place and I had to pass through that area, there I saw a woman being mugged. There have been countless such instances and it is now that the mayor has started to do something about it. This forces my family to go to restaurants that are located really far from home which results in wastage of fuel.Because of the current situation, our neighborhood is desparately in need of a new restaurant.
Secondly, these restaurants are very poorly maintained and are not popular at all due to that. For instance, my family and I decided to pay a visit to one of the restaurants and I ordered spaghetti with meatballs, my love for the dish was absolutely demolished when I found a roach floating in the sauce. For this reason, I feel that a new restaurant should be built as soon as possible
In conclusion, the bad location and poor maintenance of the restaurants in my neighborhood puts us in a situation where we desparately need a restaurant that is located in a lively area and is maintained properly.