The new announcement that a new restaurant is going to be constructed in my neighborhood rises people's attention. Due to possible noise all day round made by this restaurant and its customers, in many people's opinion, it is not an advisable proposal. Contrary to their viewpoints is my perspective that the new restaurant can benefit people considerably, due to its contributions to providing convenience of having meals and making frequent social interaction more possible.
Among all the benefits of building a new restaurant in our neighborhood is the convenience provided for people who are too busy to cook for themselves. Citizens nowadays are leading a hustling and bustling lifestyle, and therefore restaurants with high walkability gain growing popularity among these citizens. Undoubtedly, the newly built restaurant in our neighborhood can not only deprive people living in the surroundings of the hassle of preparing meals, but also help them save a huge amount of time. For example, even though my parents are extremely busy, they have to cook every day for three meals on account of the lack of restaurants surrounded our neighborhood. I always hear from their complaints about that cooking is quite time-consuming as well as their hope for an accessible restaurant. Hence, I believe that the newly established restaurant is beneficial for my parents, since it can save quantities of their time and distract them from routine cooking.
Another primary benefit of the newly built restaurant revolves around the fact that it makes it easier for people living in the surroundings to have more social interaction with each other. It is an undisputed fact that never can two individuals maintain connected with merely occasional communication. To some extent, restaurants can function as a kind of social and vibrant platform, where residents can encounter and converse with diverse people. With constant and continuous interaction in the canteen, there is no doubt that some of them can form and keep a steady relationship and eventually become good friends. Take my friend's grandpa, once a lonely elderly, as an instance. He always has his breakfast in a local canteen and beside him, several other local people consume food there as well. With time going, the grandpa got acquainted with some of the latter and formed a firm friendship with them. As a result, the grandpa never feels lonely any more. Therefore, I believe the restaurant in our neighborhood could serve in the same way as the canteen the grandpa often goes to. In other words, the canteen can enhance interaction and keep people away from being lonely and frustrated.
Admittedly, building a restaurant in the neighborhood does have its disadvantages. For one thing, it may encourage people to lead an unhealthy life given that the food provided by the restaurant may be nutritionally-deficient, like French fries, hamburgers and fried chicken in McDonald's. In addition, people may spend much money on meals in return for the saved time owing to the relatively high cost. However, from my point of view, all these drawbacks could be addressed. One feasible solution is to balance the times eating at home or at the restaurant. What's more, to save money, people can invite their friends and share the bill together.
In a sum, though there are some minor downsides of having a new restaurant, I support to build a new one in our neighborhood in that it makes it more convenient for people to live and works as an interaction platform.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... going, the grandpa got acquainted with some of the latter and formed a firm friendship wit...
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...es eating at home or at the restaurant. Whats more, to save money, people can invite ...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, kind of, no doubt, as a result, as well as, for one thing, in other words, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2949.0 1977.66487455 149% => OK
No of words: 575.0 407.700716846 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12869565217 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89685180668 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04578099222 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 290.0 212.727598566 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504347826087 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 908.1 618.680645161 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9581835883 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.423076923 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1153846154 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.65384615385 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117418513561 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0368962361261 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423635559248 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0831639645319 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303367873557 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 86.8835125448 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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